The Beast

I am the beast,1

Prowling in the night,2

Looking around3

For one last bite.4

I hear a twig snap.5

It is close by.6

I grin evilly;7

It's time is nigh.8

I creep closer9

Towards the sound10

Of a young horse11

Bounding around.12

It is quite plump,13

How nice for me.14

I will eat well tonight15

And sleep with glee.16

I sneak around17

Behind its back18

And then I pounce19

Upon my snack.20

It struggles beneath 21

My ripping claws.22

I start to bite,23

Then I pause24

As a loud boom goes off25

And I am a wreck26

When the bullet27

Goes through my neck.28

I fall upon 29

The moonlit ground,30

Struggling to 31

Make a sound.32

And now the world33

Is fading fast.34

I see my life 35

go flying past.36

My blood has stained 37

The ground bright red.38

I realize I 39

Will soon be dead,40

Because I,41

The mighty beast,42

So very wanted a feast.43

Yet now a feast 44

I will become45

For my life46

Is almost done.47

I see a tunnel48

In the night49

And at the end50

Is a bright, white light51

So I headed to where 52

The light lied,53

And this marks the day54

The great beast died.55

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This is a random poem I made up last night (9/13/08) I gt inspired to write it while I was...brushing my teeth!! XD

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  • Windsong1041
    December 8, 2008
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    nice ;-)

    Nice randomness poem! Bravo!!!


  • VioletRays
    October 31, 2008

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    Grrreat! It was funny... but the beast DID die... so thats not funny... but it was funny cause he was all... "IM AMAZING!" and then he dies cause a bullet kills him and hes all "WAA!" sorry, im hyper and I felt like reading something!

    -Kindl

  • KixiusMaximusArsus
    October 7, 2008

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    Wow this was just awesome lol. I really like how you made it ryhme (those are my favorite kinds of poems). It was also very entertaining, I mean the beast is the hunter, and then it turns, and he becomes the hunted. Great job with this, I really enjoyed it
    -kixxy-

  • spaz4ever
    September 29, 2008
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    mk, r u online rite now???

  • spaz4ever
    September 24, 2008
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    wow

    that was really good! did the horsie die????


  • CrazySouthernGirl
    September 21, 2008
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    Awesome poem!!

  • AkikoLovesGaara
    September 15, 2008
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    SWEET!!!!!

    I Wonder What Kind Of Animal It Is......

    • Maruko of the Chaos
      September 15, 2008
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      I always kind of thought of it as a big cat, like a mountain lion or something...I'm a cat lover, so that's what I would usually think of -_-' But by a big cat, I don't mean one that's slender, I mean one that's a little stockier, but not fat. 0.o yeah. -_-'

  • Maruko of the Chaos
    September 15, 2008
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    Meeeee!!!

    Yay!! My random poem!! ^_^ Yes, I do realize I accidently put 'sloser' instead of 'closer' in line 9. -_-' It's fun to comment on my own stuff XD I might put up another poem sometime.

  • Aura-Starlight
    September 15, 2008

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    Randomness is good. But you thought of this while brushing your teeth? Niice.

    And I think on Line '9' you meant "Closer", not "Sloser". Haha. But good job! I liked this. The dreaded beast, only to soon be a feast.

    Awesome.


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    September 14, 2008

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    Line 9 'closer'

    While brushing you teeth? Nicely done. It had a good flow. The only place I stumbled was line 9 thru 11, but other then that I loved it.
    Brooke

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