My werewolf~will I ever see him again?

I hadn't left my room in a week. My scars were healed, but I told my mother that I still felt bad. I couldn't stop thinking about Connor when my mother came into my room to tell me that I was needed in the front court. When I got there I saw a man and the werewolf clan that lived on the otherside of the woods. As soon as he saw me he pointed at me and said "There, that was the one that attacked me!" I almost cried out. Everyone was staring at me and I could only stutter out a little 'no'. "She did not !" My head snapped up and standing between me and the man, that I figured was the werewolf that attacked me, was Connor. I almost ran towards him, but my mother held me back. "You attacked her, I saw it." The man that I can also guess was the leader of the pack, looked paniked for a second, but he quickly said "You're only twelve you don't know what you saw." "I know exactly what I saw." " fine." The leader said and turned to the pack "All who believe me howl." He asked and there were about three howls in total. "Now who believes him?" I felt the ground shake from all the howls. My mother finally released me and I sprinted at Connor at hugged him. He just pet my head then sent me away and the pack receeded backwards. He turned to look at me just before he followed the pack back into the woods, but when I smiled at him he smiled for a second before looking at someone behind me and sprinting off. I turned and skipped back to my room ignoring the looks everyone gave me. When I got back I found a note in my pocket it said 'meet me at the place where you were attacked when the moon is at it's highest point' I looked out side and noticed the moon was almost there, so I jumped out my window and sprinted into the woods. 1

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  • Bells Kelly
    November 4, 2008

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    good work, interisting.
    You need to seperate it, put in more paragraphs.
    When people are talking give each person they're own line.
    Even if it is only one word.
    cheers
    Good job
    Hunter~