Oedipus Vollier

FULL NAME - Oedipus Vollier1

PERSONAL QUOTE - "I was not born insane, but made so by society. That is my debt to civilization. Repaying them for what they have done to me."2

DOB - May 31, 2005 (Not Brought Up In Story)3

PHYSICAL APPEARANCES (eyes, hair, height, distinguishing marks) - brown eyes, long brown hair, 5'11, several scars on arms, a tattoo of bronze strapped armor on his shoulder. 4

PERSONALITY - A guy who likes to stay to himself. Doesn't fight unless you mess with him first, once he's fighting though, he fights until you don't get up ever again. Vengeance for his parent's death is always on his mind. And as he kills his mind slips deeper and deeper into madness.5

BACKGROUND - Former prince of the Empire. When he was seven his father, heir to the throne, and mother were slaughtered, he was the only one to escape. He found refuge at a radical liberal home and was trained to fight along his two adopted brothers Mason and Joseph. 6

LIKES: Fighting. His two brothers: Mason and Joseph. 7

DISLIKES: Guns. The Empire who turned their back on him. Anyone who messes with him.8

GOALS - Get revenge on those who cause him pain, especially those responsible for killing his parents in cold blood.9

ABILITIES - Very intelligent, incredible fighting ability10

STRENGTHS - Charismatic, handsome, strong, emotionless, warrior.11

WEAKNESSES - Cocky, Falling into insanity.12

OTHER - He is a total BA!

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  • Tarja
    September 14, 2008

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    Well... this could have had a bit more detail but I have to say Oedipus seems most intriguing. It seems like he has potential for a great story. I am mostly interested in his relationship with his brothers. (Love the name Mason by the way) Thanks so much for entering and good luck!