walking with death

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Here's a tale 1

that needs told2

a story of one3

who knows no joy4

no happiness.5

You see she walks6

tho not alone7

for you see8

Death always is with her.9

It has always been so10

for one such as she.11

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  • condor gold member
    October 17, 2008
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    yep. A jolly good write. Death walking with her always. I like the way you put this across. Your wording was such, it got me to go back and read it again. It sound good. I think to me it reminds me of my younger years when i felt lost and was a little rebellious, I'm sure death walked with me too. Well done on this piece of work trekkergirl.