Dear daddy,1
Today at school, a girl picked on me.. She was laughing cause I didn't have a daddy. I replied I do have a daddy. she just laughed and said where?.. Daddy, I cried right then and there. I can't stand people who have daddys. I feel alone and not wanted.. Why did they take you away from me.. I can't take it anymore.. I am in counsling now. Since you left I been dinosied with depression. what is that? I wish you were here I am still a little girl with lots to learn. I wish I could be up there with you. But I don't wanna kill myself, No I don't I wanna be a big girl. I can make it through it.. Mommy, seems to be moving on fine. She is dating more guys then ever. She turned into a little slut... She meets guys off the internet to fuck them... That's nasty. Your grand children are happy to see your pics. Even though Desriee was only a year old. She misses you. And Yes daddy I had another one.. As you died she was born. Another beautiful little girl.. She's my life... Then I had another one.. I know only 15 with 3 kids.. I 3 year old.. another 1 year old and a 7 month.. I made lots of mistakes. I don't know.. I can't keep stright since you passes away.. O and sister Kelly is having her first baby.. She named it Masiella. I know us ricans.. But it's ur fault.. Just kidding.. u made us rican.. hehe... O and I got cault up in drugs.. More into weed.. and drinking like crazy... I am also a part time worker not for the work force. I strip for my friends and have sex with them for money.. it's a way to pay for my kids since mommy isn't around any more to help me live. I gave up school to I dropped out today.. Yes, Well, mother is here and she is drunk.. O shit I better hide..2
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Awesome!!Heck Yes It Was!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow!That poem is AMAZING I felt so much emotion, sadness, anger, and a sense of failure. I'm so sorry, but hey, you wrote an awesome poem about it.It was one of the best I've seen. Keep on writing. -
thats sad and really emotional, i really like it, Beautiful , keep on writing
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I can't tell you how this really touched me, this is really down to earth writing, it touches base with the reality of life as it is without your daddy there anymore, and greatly can I relate this so much so, I too, all grown up with a family of my own grew up most of my life time without a daddy, yet in time, I learned that God is the bid daddy in the sky and that He is the father to the child who is without a father or mother or both. glad to have come by, great writing filled with emotions.
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