Falling Apart

A falling angel,1

A breaking dragon,2

A tearing heart,3

A smashing flagon,4

A frozen teardrop,5

A drying lake,6

A raining desert,7

A burning stake.8

It’s all falling apart,9

The words will shatter,10

The clouds will slit,11

And the dreams will scatter,12

The ink won’t flow,13

The rope won’t knot,14

The book won’t read,15

The blood won’t clot,16

It’s all falling apart,17

The words will shatter,18

The clouds will slit,19

And the dreams will scatter,20

The wind will rain,21

The rain will blow,22

The sky will tremble,23

The plants will sew,24

It’s all falling apart,25

The words will shatter,26

The clouds will slit,27

And the dreams will scatter,28

My heart will run,29

My blood will stretch,30

My mind will leave,31

My eyes will sketch,32

It’s all falling apart,33

The words will shatter,34

The clouds will slit,35

And the dreams will scatter,36

Your lips will smell,37

Your nose will sing,38

Your luck will drain,39

Your life will swing,40

It’s all falling apart,41

The words will shatter,42

The clouds will slit,43

And the dreams will scatter,44

The fields paint the sky in green,45

The peaks all lap upon the beach,46

The sea join the towns and cities galore,47

And the earth wheels up far out of reach,48

It’s all falling apart,49

The words will shatter,50

The clouds will slit,51

And the dreams will scatter,52

A diamond won’t shine,53

A flower won’t smell,54

A life won’t end,55

A tree won’t fell,56

It’s all falling apart,57

The words will shatter,58

The clouds will slit,59

And the dreams will scatter,60

And guess what? It’s our fault.

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23, 2008

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    This was interesting... each line had their own meaning..its own meaning: yet as a whole it worked. Like echo said it looks like you put a lot of effort into making this perfect or near to and I must say I enjoyed it immensely.

    Good luck with the contest
    ♣ Blake


  • Fervent-Author
    September 17, 2008

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    lol, this was a very good poem, it seems like you put some serious thought into it, nice work.

    Echo