French Vanilla Stained Teeth

He whispered his soft secret into her ear, as she quickly brought her long, bony hands to her mouth, she widened her eyes and pretended like she didn't already know...  1

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Everyday they woke up to the tan streak of sunlight making its way through the tiny holes in his blinds. He held her tight, so tight that she could feel his organs pumping blood. He wasn't as strong as she thought he would be, he cried every night, and she, of course, held him in such a way that, for a split second, she made herself believe that she cared. 3

She had her morning coffee, French Vanilla to be exact. Her favorite. She grabbed her wide, blue cup, the black and gold vintage patterns running along the edges made it glow, screaming 'Happy Anniversary.' She sipped the hot liquid, burning her tongue and staining her whitened teeth. Just how she always took it. He entered the foyer, leaving behind the fog the steamy shower produced. Adding no importance to this cliched morning routine. His white towel hung from his hips as he walked up to his darling wife and grabbed her waist, kissing her neck. Faking the effection that everyone else admired. 4

Flashing her stained teeth she let out a sigh of relief. Trapped in this loveless marriage for over a decade prepared her for every obstacle she dealt with, including her other love, including her other life-Amnesia.5

She glued her eyes to the poloroid pictures laying on the coffee table. Bringing back none of the memories they shared together...

Author notes

I know it's very cliche. Sorry. But SOMEONE wanted me to put it back up.

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  • lemonlover14
    April 8
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    hello
    i like this story
    but you need to write more of it
    please?
    anyways i love you
    bye bye

    beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 5.


  • forevermyangel14
    September 13, 2008

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    IT'S NOT CLICHE
    I LOVE IT
    NOW LEAVE IT.
    yay
    <3
    it's awesome.
    dont you agreeeveryone else?
    SAY YES
    or i will stab your phone