Stories from War (Chapter 1 of 3)

I turned on the video camera and started the interview.  The first question flew by as did the next.  I paused briefly from the hurried scribbling of my pencil on the page; my hand struggled to keep up with my thoughts as the amazing story began to unravel with each word she spoke.  I stopped, as my grandma took a pause in the narration, and glanced into her fair, gently wrinkled face.  The lines stretching across her forehead and cheeks added an air of proficiency in years, coupled with the curly bleach-white hair that dignifies one with wisdom.  Her rich, European accent caused each letter she spoke to sound unique and made the English language sound out of place, for the broken syllables she spoke could only truly be appreciated in their native language.  My grandma, I call her Oma, sat next to me in a stiff, wooden chair.  Her eyes looked down into the couch from behind a pair of dark, thickly-rimmed glasses seeming to gaze back in time to a place far away, as she recounted her life…1

Living near the railroad in the industrial town of Osek, Germany, we had grown accustomed to seeing soldiers pass by on their way to the front lines.  Mother would sometimes take me along with her to meet them with loaves of bread and apple juice from the orchards, but I never expected the war to come so close.  My two older brothers, Gerhard and Walter had gone to join Hitler’s Nazis and father and mother were always worried about them.  I was 14 then, a girl my age is expected to never cry about anything, but I missed them very much and just wanted them to come home.  To be with us again; I wished this war was over.  They left 3 years ago and since then, nothing has been the same for me.  Mother started working at the factory, cooking dinner for the workers and father started to work later also.2

I graduated from the German school and had to ride a trolley 30 minutes to another school in the nearby town of Krupka.  One morning, we were all riding in the trolley car watching the smooth green hills roll by when a huge explosion shook the car, almost causing it to go off the tracks.  The driver stopped, as bombs shattering the earth and sent enormous clouds of dirt skyward.  He ordered us to run to a nearby farmhouse, hoping it might be saved from the Allies’ bombs.  At that moment I had the overwhelming feeling of wanting to be home.  I wanted nothing more than to run home and hide under my bed.  And so, leaping out of the trolley, I dashed across the fields; my schoolbooks, a forgotten worry in my haste.  Above the whistling of the bombs I heard the driver’s voice yelling for me to come back, but I was too numb to comprehend what he meant.  I ran through cow pastures and up a hill, tripping and stumbling, until I reached my house at the bottom.  That was the first of many experiences with bombs and war.3

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Context: This is a semi-true story and the major events are factual. It's the story of a young girl growing up in Osek, Germany during World War 2.

This is only my second or third experience writing a story so please tell me what you think; good or bad.

iGit

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  • iGit
    April 1, 2005
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    Thank you Emily!! It's good to hear people's opinions of it because I could use the advice. I really wasn't sure how this would turn out, it was a bit hard to write from a girl's point of view for once!! lol It's not something I have a whole lot of experience in. How are you Emily? I haven't seen you on in a while. I hope you're doing well!!! God bless you and give you peace.

    David

  • Emilyski
    April 1, 2005
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    I think it's awesome!! i'm glad there's two more chapters, too because this makes me courious to read more.

  • iGit
    March 16, 2005
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    Cool, I'm glad you like it... I'm posting the other 2 chapters now... lol Thanks Tonya, keep shining bright!

    David


  • -Ask me- I dare you
    March 16, 2005
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    I think it's good so far... but i want to keep going... lol... I can't wait to read more... WWII really interests me and i love hearing stories about it... Well, good job! And God bless!!
    ~tonya~