Paradise

She is so beautiful like the sunset over the ocean1

She wishes for a better life2

I'll be there for you night and day3

I'll always love her4

As much as she cries she can't let go of her pain5

She cries and feels worthless but I'll never let her go6

She'll never be alone7

I'll be there for her night and day8

I'll always love her9

She won't ever feel like she's unloved because I will always love her10

She makes me feel like I'm in paradise11

Her eyes are so beautiful that when I look into them I am lost for words12

Her body is so perfect that when I look at it I feel like I am looking at an angel13

She makes me feel special and loved14

I will never turn my back on her15

I will always make her feel special because to me she is the most special thing I have16

I love her17

I would walk 1000 miles through the rain or snow just to see her gorgeous face18

I will do anything for her19

I don't want to hug her 'cos I'm afraid I'll never be able to let go20

And since the day I met her I have only thought about her once and I haven’t stopped21

I love her more than anything in the world22

I would do anything for her23

People say they would jump in front of cars for her24

But I would jump in front of anything25

Her ex was a total idiot 'cos he lost the most beautiful person in the world26

People say they would give her the sky27

But for her, I would capture the moon28

Every minute we spend together I treat like it's our last29

I will never be able to put her in the past30

I will never forget our first kiss31

I will never forget our first date32

I will always treasure her33

I will always love her34

She has brought happiness to my life35

And as much as I try I can't stop thinking about her36

Nothing in this world is more beautiful than she37

I will always stick up for her38

And if she ever left me there would forever be a hole in my heart39

I have a quest I am yet to start40

I put my heart in her hands41

The top of the world is where she stands42

My life is incomplete without her43

Every minute without her my heart feels like it's being torn apart44

Every minute without her feels like forever45

I love her46

I miss her47

I want to be with her forever48

She is my world49

She is my life50

If she ever leaves me I will forever live a life of pain51

I need her to survive52

I would never be able to live a single day without her53

There is not a single second that goes by that I don't think of her54

Her eyes are like diamonds55

They glitter in the sun56

Her personality like fire57

Keeps me warm inside58

I love her

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Ok so yer my boyfriend wrote that for/about me... what do you think?

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Comments


  • HengmanL
    September 30, 2008
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    Awesome

    Great work. I never knew we could submit poetry!!


  • Solei
    September 26, 2008
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    very beautiful... its really good. I tried writing poetry lol, but it was bad. lol you're good