I have another boyfriend. He is the greatest thing that has happened to me.1
When he holds me, it is amazing. I am only 14, but I think I am in love.2
Here's the story.3
I approached my friend Draopadie.( Dray-Oh-Poddie ). I asked her about Devon as my eye twitched...I was thinking, (How did it become me asking him out, from me hating him in the begining of the year?) 4
Draopadie wrote him a note. I caught a glimpse of it when she passed it to him. The paper landed on his desk with a whispery sound.5
He read the note, and I could almost hear his voice as he read it inside his head.6
The words, I was waiting for, appeared on the paper.7
"Do you like her?"8
"Yeah, a lot."9
I saw the answer he wrote back.10
I was very happy.11
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Me and Devon where waiting in the hallway. His arms were around me and I felt extremley happy. His arms felt his way down to my hips. With his arms around me I felt so truely happy inside.13
I turned around and looked into his eyes. His lips were ebckoning to me.14
I leaned in for the kiss. At last, I felt the warmth of him.15
This went on for several minutes. We kissed, and sadly, the bell rang. I was very agitated. When we left, he muttered the words......16
"I love you."17
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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YEA abeautiful story to bad im the one stuck nowing how it ends that really suxs
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this is a sweet poem. I liked it alot. keep up the good work. take care
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That was very sweet. But too short!!!! You should write another one!!!
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Oooawww how touching! This is so beautiful.

