I Dream

1

I dream sometimes2

of a world where I may live3

sing for joy and dance around4

inhaling the sweetness of life5

and enjoying the pleasure it brings.6

But the alarm bell rings,7

dragging me into reality8

as I fight with all my mite9

to remain there...10

so I may be myself and be free.11

But it wasn't meant to be.12

As I open my eyes13

lightning clashes, thunder roars14

bitter droplets slowly fall15

now I must share my space with you.16

I live, but I have no life17

you've made sure of that18

riding your stallion, mace in hand19

you wear your stolen crown20

and cast me into the ground.21

I move without a sound22

but your beedy eyes do see me23

they will start soon I know,24

those words slam down like hale25

I cast my eyes down...26

Just how you like it 27

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments


  • citcat
    February 17

    Edit | Reply
    wow that was really good i loved it...it was amazing, excellent work!

  • Vampwolf
    September 13, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Very nice. I'd like it if you could take this and add it to a story. It would be great way for an emotional prince or princess to express their feelings. However, it is also a great peice in and of itself.


    • ZarekzTalpina
      September 17, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      yeah i hjave actually thought of makin some of my poetry into stories...i won't be able to for a month or 2 but i'll try and do it after that


  • xXhunterXx
    September 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Amazing

    Wow your a great poet I could never come up with something this meaningful..Its amazing and such heartfelt. You pull the reader in and make them feel like it is them that is saying the words on the page. Great job cant wait for more.