Her story Pt. 2

They continued talking, as he took her other hand.  This was different  for her.  She was confused and wasn't sure whether to pull back, and what he would do if she did.1

Just as she was about to pull away, a close friend of hers walks in.  'Umm, are you two okay in here?'  She stuttered, smiled and nodded at her concerned friend.  'Yeah, we were just talking'  Her friend smiled back and left them as they were when she had found them.2

She took her hands away from his and told him she had to get on with her work.  He smiled sincerely and let her go.3

That night she thought about what had happened.  She was completely shocked that he would even get that close to her.  Maybe he might make another move, she wasn't sure, she just forgot it and moved on.4

Over the next fortnight he was constantly annoying her.  Everywhere she went, he was there.  He would find her and place his arms around her waist, and put his face close to hers.5

After a month of him annoying her, she went to her friends.  By that stage it was getting quite bad.  She started avoiding him completely, went no where alone and always had a friend by her side. But sometimes she wasn't allowed to have a friend with her.6

One afternoon, when she was in wood work, all of her class were out making things when she went into the classroom to get a pencil.  He followed her into the classroom, she smiled at him nicely.  He came up close to her, took her hands in his.  She stepped back looking into his eyes, he put his forehead against hers and pushed her gently against a wall of the room.  He pushed up against her tightly.  She looked away hoping he would get the point she didn't want to be doing this.  She could feel his warm breath against where her top collar parted at her chest.  She breathed deeply, panicking and pulled away.  7

Quickly snatching her pencil she had came in to get, she looked around at him still watching her..but still against the wall, where he has held her.  She smiled at him awkwardly and left the room.8

To be continued...9

Author notes

Umm...part two I hope you enjoy.

~*Meri

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  • Shari-Lei
    March 16, 2005
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    You've got me hooked. I'll definitely be finishing this. its very intriguing. i can see how it wouldn't be the best of situations. good work here

  • DistantWorld
    March 15, 2005
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    very good. I would very much like to know why she was avoididng him, why was he annoying her, What are there feeling. It is a very good story, but I find myself wondering what is there thoughts during all odf this. I think you were in such a hurry you doidn't look close enough. It is very good and I am off to part 3.

    Bella

  • Merciless Beauty
    March 15, 2005
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    Part three is already posted

    ~*Meri

  • Nomes
    March 15, 2005
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    What? You left me hangin'! he he. Looking forward to the third part.

  • Merciless Beauty
    March 15, 2005
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    Really happy you like it. REALLY appreciate it. Thankyou. I haven't even thought about the third part yet


  • d a f f o d i l
    March 15, 2005
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    yay! THIS IS ACE!!!!! WHERES PART THREEEEEEEE?? LOVE IT!

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