Little Susy Chp.3

Susy thinks fast,she decides to take Lindsey and goes into the bathroom locking the door."If we don't want to get caught,then we have to go,and now!" They open the window and jump out onto the cold metal stairs. They can hear the shouts from the front of the building.1

Susy and Lindsey jog at a quick pace before the cops go search through the apartment they were in. Down two blocks away in the alley they stop and catch their breath. "That was a little close this time Suss." "I know, We're pretty lucky we didn't get caught like last week." 2

They head off in different directions to go to their houses.Susy slips in,thinking that she did pretty good,then she hears her mom."SUSY,you are never to leave this house like that ever again,do u hear me?" "I am grounding you,no T.V,music,computer,NO nothing!" "God,do you have to be such a bitchy mother!" "young lady i will not get that attitude from you,or i will lengthen your punishment!" 3

She climbs the stairs and slams the door,latching her little hook she bought for her room. Taking a glance at the clock by her bed she decides that she might as well head of to sleep.Grabbing her black pajama pants,her favorite,and slips them on.Taking out her earrings and necklaces she lies in her bed. Skimming into a deep slumber.4

*Beep Beep Beep* Slamming her fist on her alarm clock she rises.Picking herself out of sleep she stumbles to the bathroom. Wiping off last nights makeup she rinses her face. Now adding new makeup. Stepping back into her room she inspects her closet for something to wear. Choosing her Perfect Angel Black shirt with her Light blue jeans she puts them on.Walking back into the bathroom she brushes her hair.5

Deciding that she looks decent enough she grudges down the stairs. Her mom already left for work. Reaching for a bowl she pours some cocoa puffs out to eat. Sitting while flipping through the channels to find something. Done, She gets up and walks to school. Already she can sense that today is gonna be another boring day.6

Author notes

idk.....my writing sucked in the last two..this one..idk a bit better....

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  • mystic oceania
    March 14, 2005
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    took you forever to write again! glad you did! really great job! keep it up ok? great job and your writing in the last two did not suck!!
    ~mystic
    Edited on Mar 14, 7:45 p.m. because ''.