Eyes:Chapter3:The Weirdness Continues!!

(Disclaimer:You Know The Drill,I Do Not Own The Show Naruto Or Anything Related To It.Except I Own The Naruto Uncut Box Sets,1-9.I Watch Them Sometimes(I Don't Own The Copywrites Or Anything).BUT,That's Not The Point!!I Also Do Not Own Any Song That May Be In This Fanfiction!!I Only Own This SToryline & My OCs.People Must Ask For Permission Before They Can Use Them!!!)1

"Talking" 'Thoughts,Journal Entries,Singing' (Comments By Me Or Switching POVS OR Important Info About The Story!!)2

(Neji's POV:That Night)(MWUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!*hack* *hack* *off topic*)3

Little Did Tenten Know That I Was Watching her.Watching her Every move,& Listening To her Every Word.4

'She's So Beautiful......Why Didn't I See It before?!'5

While I Cursed My Stupidity In The Subjects Of Love,Tenten Was Approched By The Feudal Lord's Son6

(Me:Who Is In Desperate Need Of A Name)7

"Hello"He Said.8

He Was In The shadows So We[Tenten & I] Could Not See Him,We Could Only Hear His Deep Voice.9

"I Never Learned Your Name Beautiful......Please Tell it To Me."He Said Sweetly But Firmly.10

Wished I Could Kill Him Right There & Then For Getting With in My Range Of My Nontolerating(Me:Not Sure If That's A Word,but Who Cares?!XP) Circle Of Hitting On Tenten.11

"W-w-w-Why Would I Need To?!"She Snapped Back.12

"Well...If You Are Going To Be My Bride,I Must Know You're Name.Now Shouldn't I?"13

'ARGH!!!!TO ASSUME THAT TENTEN IS GOING TO BE YOU'RE BRIDE!!YOU SHALL PAY!!!!!' I Thought.14

He Stepped Out of The Shadows & I Couldn't believe My Eyes.HE WAS SO FREAKING FAT!!!He Looked Like Choji When He Used His Exspantion (Sp?) Jutsu.I Wonder How The Servants Carried Him Around The Castle.I Looked At Tenten & She Was Freaking Out As Well.15

"M-m-m-m-m-my n-name....Is.......T-t-tenten.....Your Majesty."I Could See That Tenten Was Quite Shaken Up About This Situation.Who'd Blame Her?16

"Now That You Have Told Me Your Name,I Shall Tell You Mine....My Name Is Kuto.But You Shall Refer To Me As Prince Kuto."17

"Uh-huh......BYE NOW!!"She Said As She Ran Off.18

"BUT MY BEAUTIFUL TENTEN!!!!!"He yelled As She Ran Away From Him.19

'Good Tenten,That's My Teammate!!'I Thought proudly As I Went To Our[Tenten's & My]Room.20

(Tenten's POV:The Next Morning)(me:HE HAS A NAME!!!!)21

I Woke Up To The Sight Of Neji Sleeping Next To Me.I Was In Shock,I Had No Idea Where I Was.I Thought That Last Night Was A Dream.But Then....Kuto Came In.That Would Scar me For Life...22

"Hello My beautiul bride-to-be,Did You Sleep Well?"He Asked With A Smile.23

"Ummm...uhhhh....well.....ummmmm......I.....Y-yes,Prince Kuto....."24

"That Is Good My Sweet....."he said While Taking my hand & leading me To The Dining Room.25

I Saw Neji Following Us.& he Did Not Look Happy,He Must Mot Be A Morning Person.But,He Never Looked This Angry When We Woke Him Up On Missions.It Must be Prince Kuto.....(Me:Akaatty.Choji Looks Thin Compared To Kuto)Or It Could be Me.....But,What Have I Done To get Him Angry?26

"HEY!!"Yelled Neji As He Was Rammed Into A Wall Post By Our Beloved(Meur HATED Prince Kuto)Prince Kuto."WTH WAS THAT FOR?!"27

Prince Kuto Turned Around & Said In A Scotish Accent"Because You're Not Acting Happy!!!"28

Neji's face Was Princeless After Prince Kuto Said That.29

"NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!I'M TRAPPED WITH A SCOTISH IMPERSONATOR WITH A EXTREMELY HAPPY ATTITUDE!!!!"Screamed Neji(me: That's Kinda OOCish )As He Ran The Other Direction.30

"N-NEJI!!!COME BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKK!!!!!!"I Screamed.31

"Forget Him,My Love!I Must Tell You My Plans!!"He Said As He Dragged Me To His Room.32

We Came Into A Room With All Sorts Of papers All over The Floor.I Saw His Advisor Planning Something.When I Came Up To Him,He Screamed Like A Girl(Me_o....Why Do I Make All My Bad Guys Weird?)33

"MY PRINCE!!!!IT'S HER!!!!"He Screamed.34

"Shut UP!!!"Prince Kuto Screamed."She's With Me."35

"But-but Sire!!Do You Really Think That She Should Know About This?!"He Said In Protest.36

'Geez!!'I Thought'If You Hate So Much,Just Say So!!!'37

"She Is To Be My Bride,& I Will Not hide Anythning From My Bride-to-be!!"38

"Y-yes...Sire...."39

Prince Kuto Then Took My Hand & Lead Me Into Another Room.40

"My Dear"He Whispered In My Ear."I Am Planning To Kill The Feudal Lord,So That I May Be the Feudal Lord.Promise Me That You Will Not Tell Anyone About This....Please My Dear....Please..."41

(Me:GEEZ!!!WHAT IS WITH BAD GUYS?!They ALWAYS Want To Take Over SOMETHING!!Whether It's A Country Or A Ramen Bowl!)(Me:hahahaha....I Said Ramen Bowl. )42

Before I Could Say Anything,He Interrupted Me"I Knew You Wouldn't Say Anything To Anyone About This!!!"43

(Me:She Didn't Say ANYTHING Prince Kuto, You Idiot )44

(Neji's POV,Breakfest Time)45

'Journal Entry,46

Tenten Is Somewhat Engaged(Sp?) To A Big,Fat,Overly Happy,prince.47

I Wish I Could Stangle Him & Blame It On The Advisor Now!!48

I Have Been Listening To Music Lately.49

Sometimes It Helps.50

Tenten Looked Beautiful yesterday,& She Looks Even More Beautiful Today.51

I Wish I Could Tell Her.52

She Looks So Beautiful In That Black With Hot Pink Cherry Blossoms Kimono.53

I Wonder What Everyone's Doing Right Now...54

Hyuga Neji'55

(Somewhere In Konoha)56

Naruto Sneezed Suddenly.57

"Oh!Somebody's Thinking Of You!!"Leiko Teased.58

'It Wasn't Me!!!For Once.....' Thought Hinata.59

Naruto Came Up To Hinata.60

"How Hinata!!You Look Pretty!!"61

Naruto Was About To Say More When A Picture Of An Angry Neji Came Up In His Mind.62

"T-t-thank you...Naruto-kun....."She Said Quietly.63

& Throughout The Rest Of The Trip Home,He Didn't Say Another Word To Hinata.64

(Me:The Trip Takes 1 & 1/2 Days)65

Author notes

FINALLY!!!The Third Chapter Is Done!!!DON'T KILL ME!!!I'M SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG!!!!Many Thanx To MarukoandKomaru & YukilovesShino!!(I Think Thats How She Spelled It XD)I Thank MarukoandKomaru For Being There & Helping Me Get Some Inspiration!!& I Thank YukilovesShino For Helping Me By Listening To Me Rambling This Chapter In Her Ears On 7/9/08 & 8/9/08.(Although It Wasn't Quite Finished When I Did)I Also Thank Music!!!I Get Soooo Many Ideas For Songfics & Fanfics It's Unbelievable(Sp?)I Hope My Cousin Found His DS!!& I Would Like To Thank The Creator Of Naruto(Whose Name Escapes Me At The Moment) For Creating The AWESOME Anime.But The Question Is....Why Am I Thanking Everyone Now?The Series Isn't Over.I Just Had This Overwhelming(Sp?) Moodswing Of Gratitude & I Had To Thank Everyone Now For Helping Me Overcome My STUPID WRITERSBLOCK!!!I Also Thank My Computer In My Room & The Hours I Spent In Here With The Door Locked.It Really Helps When Looking For Info.

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  • Windsong1041
    December 6, 2008

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    YEAH YEAH GOOD

    Hey good job! Your stories are always so so good. I'll try to write something on storywrite soon....:-D

    beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 5.


  • Imaru-Mi-Amore
    October 1, 2008

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    Funny and interesting......LOL when you called the prince fat!! Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!!


  • MarukoTheCrazyKitty
    September 15, 2008

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    I can't wait!!

    I can't wait for you to make the next chapter!! This was sooo funny!!! XD "My beautiful Tenten..." 0.0 Picturing the prince saying something like that is enough to give someone nightmares XD Wait, why am I commenting on this again? XD Fat Prince!!! XD

    P.S. I am a crazy person, if you haven't noticed

  • OrangePerson42
    September 9, 2008

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    I liked it. It was pertty funny when you said the prince is fat. LOL!!!!! And that's for reading my story so far!!!!


  • MarukoTheCrazyKitty
    September 9, 2008
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    XD

    XD OMG!!! THE PRINCE IS A FAT RETARD!!!!! XD Yay! I give you inspiration!!! XD So...funnny...XD

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