I was reading a book about a king and whatever he touched will be gold. My hands felt something as I turned the page. I saw now a palace, but it wasn't really big or magnificent. I then saw a god, he asked me a what was my wish and it would come true. Suddenly, I voice came from behind me. The King!'I wish that whatever I touch in my hands will turn into gold' said the king.1
So, them god granted the wish the king made, to me! I heard my mum's voice'coming' I shouted and somehow pulled myself out of the storybook. When we ate, I touched my fork and spoon and were much heavier and was a colour which was gold.2
After I finished eating, my bowl had turned the same as the spoon and fork just like the story I nearly finished reading. Even the book's front cover turned into a goldish front cover.3
As I touched the inside of the book, I was sucked in. I'm glad that I was sucked in because I haven't finished it yet. I wandered around, I touched the king's palace to make it nicer.4
Suddenly, I saw a pool of water, I didn't want to get wet so I walked around making things nicer by touching it. I found grapes so I touched them and I brought them for souvenirs.5
I bumped into the king and touched him. 'Uh-oh!' I cried. Solders came with spears. I quickly touched them all and they stood as stiff as a rock.6
It was getting hot now and without realising it, I plunged into the pool of water. Ah, refreshing. 'Dinner time' my mum called out. 'Coming' I shouted again. This time, Nothing turned into that goldish colour again. One day, I realised that the My hands touched things and turned them into pure gold.7
And that is how I went into the storybook. The pure gold was so precious, that I kept it for a long, long, time. 8
I really did mess up the storybook. Maybe one day in the future, someone will pick up the Greek story and go through my messed up parts.9
Author notes
I got this idea from one of those short Greek stories I like.
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nice
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You should read my improved version.
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Bright idea. Just need to structure the story in more logical ways and correct some spellings.
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You're imagination runs away a lot It's a good thing! Anyways, I loved this story, it was a little bit confusing, but I understood it in the end. ^^ Nice job!
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Yeah, but I guess it was confusing and I know that I typed in wrong words and that sort of stuff.
Maybe I will write a inproved version.
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cool!
i really liked this story it keeps my attention all the way through it so i think it was a really good story and i liked the length of it so i give it 5/thumbs up -
Beautiful story! Very nice! As usual, very imaginative. It was like reading Alice in Wonderland. The 7th paragraph was a little bit confusing. Correct it if you wish. The ending was poetic. I'm becoming a fan of your stories. I'm thinking of writing a story like yours. If you want I'll correct all the mistakes in your story.
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Thanks, I really didn't explain it clearly. Maybe I will have a improved version.
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