She looked down. Why did this have to happen to her? She reached into her school bag and pulled a razor out of the back pocket. She placed it on her arm, and slashed quickly. Tears rolled down her cheeks as the blood trickled down her arm.1
"Sarah? It's me, your mother. Open the door!".2
Sarah grabbed the nearest blanket and wrapped herself in it. She plodded her way to the door and unlocked it.3
"Yes?", her words sounded full of pain.4
"Are you ok? You didn't sound very happy when you got home this afternoon."5
"I'm fine."6
Her mother smiled and closed the door. Sarah opened the blanket to find a pool of blood where her cuts had been. She went over to her bookcase and pulled out a diary. she grabbed a pen and began to write:7
Dear diary, 8
Today i felt the most pain i have ever felt, my body got used by my stepfather....9
To be continued...10
Author notes
it hasn't finished yet, but it'll be a story...
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
1 - 14 of 14
-
ohhh... that's so sad it kinda happend 2 me like i did it but then my mummy walked in and i hid my arm so fast then my mum asked me what am i hiding then she grabbed my arm and i said och... then she saw it then the look in her eyes were so deppressed and a tear came to her eyes then she walked out of the room
love always ashy
p.s. u r the bomb -
You need to add more to this Paige!! Argh!! I'm going mad! I want to know what happens!
~*Meri -
Hey Paige...I know you probably have no idea that it is the almighty and powerful...actually very short...AMELIA!!!! Mwahahaha, anyway sad, but write more soon!
~Meelz~ -
it's jus da start of my story, it'll grow...in time
-
Okay..You could start by writing a story.
-
thank you very much
-
hey, i really liked this. it is a good start to what i bet will be a great story. as to the dude that said that stuff above, don't worry about it, i thought it was good. nice work!
-
if ur going to critisize my work, atleast tell me what i shud improve on...
-
...And it's clichê, short, badly scripted story, did I mention that?
-
Well atleast you bothered to read it, even if your comment was against the author.
~*Meri -
Ah, yes, this is liable to happen to anyone with herpes.
-
hehe my name is paige too. this is sad. I love it. you write very good and hope you write more.
~peace -
Well written, i look forward to when you have written some more. Message me please when you have written more to this, Thanks so much and weldone... from Aeris.
-
Omg! Paige! That's awful! So sad! You wrote it beautifully though. I look forward to reading the rest
~*Meri
Adding your comment:
1 - 14 of 14
