I Blame You!

I blame you!
You gave me love
You gave me joy
You gave me friendship unconditional
You made me feel!1

I blame you!
You found the key
You opened the door
the one I had shut so long ago
You made me feel!2

I blame you!
You gave me light for the dark
You opened your arms to the lonely
You broke down a wall
You made me feel!3

I blame you!
My heart is torn in two
My life is incomplete
I never saw what was missing
Until you made me feel!4

I blame you!

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  • Artificial.Smiles. gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    I blame you!
    For making me love this poem(:
    So cute, and it made ME feel

    Good Luck in my Contest


    • MsAlee gold member
      November 1, 2008
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      Thanks so much. I'll gladly take the blame for you liking something I've written for it means I've done the job I set out to do.


  • TNTrouble
    September 9, 2008

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    Ahhhh...I am loving how you edited this and added that last line...it flows much better now darlin'.


    • MsAlee gold member
      September 9, 2008
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      Thank you Darling. Your right it does make it so much better.

  • TNTrouble
    September 8, 2008
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    I blame you! Interesting poem...once again it seems as if your style is changing...I like it. You are evolving.


  • Edge
    September 8, 2008
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    cool i thought it was good

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