My Mask

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Monster...beast...heartless1

Sadistic...cruel...ruthless2

Tis what they think of me3

Tis what they think they see 4

I understand...I am a man5

Who hides who I really am 6

Behind a mask of anger7

A look of impending danger8

Don't touch me I might bite9

Stay away or I'll put up a fight10

You don't want to know11

What tis behind the mask I show12

Or if you want to...oh well13

Tis not anything I would tell14

I am keeping you away15

My mask will keep you at bay16

So that you will never see17

What tis I hide inside of me.

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  • MsAlee silver member
    September 8
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    Simply beautiful in the writing. That mask of yours doesn't scare me though and you know it. I do see beyond it.


    • TNTrouble silver member
      September 8
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      Shhhhh...don't you be telling...


      • MsAlee silver member
        September 8
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        Now why would I tell anyone our little secret?


      • MsAlee silver member
        September 8
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        I'll be sure to keep it to myself.


        • TNTrouble silver member
          September 10
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          I think tis been spilled ehhh?


          • MsAlee silver member
            September 10

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            Well I didn't tell anyone, but I do think a few more are looking deeper into who you really are instead of what you show the world.


        • TNTrouble silver member
          September 10
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          Tis what I meant...after all I did put this poem here did I not?

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