Why can't he notice that I love him sooo much. This crush is not a crush. He's now someone I love with all my heart and will never forget his face. But It's a lost cause. But why does it not seem like that? The way he looks at me. The way we play around as friends? I dream about him night after night. Awaiting for him to come rescue me. My personal fairytale that will..... Never come true. I whisper his name everywhere. I want to be so much more than just friends.1
I don't want to seem like that other girl. But something he will never forget. A friend differnt from them all. And to let him know that I will always love him. Even if he doesn't return it. I will always die when I see those Brown eyes. My heart will always stop when I hug him. 2
But wait. Maybe he does have some sort of affection for me. He was worried about me when I had that problem. He was so worried it made him mad. And he's always teasing me and playing jokes. Maybe he feels the way I do. Maybe not. But from this little birdie it might happen. He just doesn't talk about it at all. 3
Maybe one day this fantasy will come true. Get married and atleast date. In my heart it's a doubt which leaves me without any love for someone who does care. Who knows. 4
I don't want to seem like that other girl. But something he will never forget. A friend differnt from them all. And to let him know that I will always love him. Even if he doesn't return it. I will always die when I see those Brown eyes. My heart will always stop when I hug him. 2
But wait. Maybe he does have some sort of affection for me. He was worried about me when I had that problem. He was so worried it made him mad. And he's always teasing me and playing jokes. Maybe he feels the way I do. Maybe not. But from this little birdie it might happen. He just doesn't talk about it at all. 3
Maybe one day this fantasy will come true. Get married and atleast date. In my heart it's a doubt which leaves me without any love for someone who does care. Who knows. 4
Author notes
This is about young Amy Longsinger. The main story out of my new story. "Freak." Freak is about this girl with unusual powers who later learns to control. But she loves this guy named Blake Summers and wonders. If this is more than "just friends.."
What do you think ???
Comments
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Pretty interesting part you've chosen here. I like the tone of this, but sometimes you capitalize things that shouldn't be, such as "Brown eyes". The B doesn't need a caps-ing. XD
Other than that, I liked this piece a lot.
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Thank you sooo much
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