I know it's there.1
I can feel it. 2
I saw it sometimes.3
I needed to get out of my house.4
I ran out of the door.5
I ran on the freezing cold grass6
that had been soaked from the rain.7
I was barefoot.8
A rock cut my foot while I ran.9
I couldn't feel it.10
It was gaining speed.11
I was so tired.12
I fell.13
I saw it's shadow.14
It came closer.15
Closer.16
Now too close.17
It was about to grab me.18
Then my eyes slowly opened.19
I saw the light streaming out of my windows.20
My face was covered with sweat.21
I was relieved to see that everything22
was just a dream.23
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awsome very cool buddy
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wow
I like it a lot!!

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weird but good yittle buddy. There were a couple of typos, but besides taht it was awesome possum


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Ah!

Kept me guessing... ^^ and then it was just a dream.
Cool piece of writing, like it ^^
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