Across the boundaries of time and space, a small flame slowly flickers. Shining through all the darkest times. It lays in waiting, never exhausted, ready to burn with the strength of the sun. Placed there many ages ago by the hands of fate and destiny. Lit with the passion of a love so rare, time itself would stand still for. Destine to burn for all of eternity, small at first then growing slowly as the paths of the two hearts intertwine.1
To the normal person, this flame exists as a decoration, or a sent. Something to cast a warm glow upon their environment. But to these two beings this flame is a symbol of something more. This flame exists within their own souls hidden deep waiting for its time to shine. Aware of its presence, yet not understanding the reason it's there.2
Since their creation the flame existed, dimly shining its light, never shedding enough to see what surrounds it. Until that one moon lit night under the darkened sky that flame erupted, shedding light brighter than the sun. It's heat, hot enough to scorch human flesh. When she looked into his eyes, not only did she see herself but she saw the reflection of the flame. As they kissed softly the flame sparked into a fire spreading through there souls.3
Finally the flame once so dime and cold is now kindled with a light so bright it pierces the darkest corners or time and never fading. Look inside the darkest reaches of your soul. There you will find your flame burning...in waiting.4
Author notes
OK this is a short short story and im not to shure about this i wrote this at work in about 5 mins so let me know what you think.
I tryed so hard and got so far in the end it doesnt even matter
What did you think? Please comment!
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stunning work here, you seem like a very talented writer... 5 minutes to write? amazing, absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for entering, best of luck
Love,
Katy
~LiquidLullaby~ -
Yeah right b4 i started work i was sitting in the back room getting my stuff togather and the words just kinda came. I wrote 2 poems 2night during work like that as well. im glad you liked it
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Nice piece, you did this in five minutes!!!!!!!!!
Really good, I love the imagery. Good luck! 
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lol no worries you were busy i know
but anyways thank for the comments babe
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i love it sorry i didnt get to read it last night
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*smiles* thank you for your imput. Growth makes everything clear. im glad you liked it. Hope you are well take care
Dawn -
*smiles* thank you very much. And i see you never have anything bad to say and i thank you im glad you liked it
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A write beautiful because of the truth it contains. Many sense it, few are aware. It is the reverse of the entry I put in for this contest, but most likely true since it spans a much longer period of time. In all our lives in all planes we have this intuitive feeling that will become more powerful and clear as we ascend through the realms. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you and take care,
Rage -
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I love the moral of this story.How you relate a flame to finding true love.I never have anything bad to say about your work. -
AWW thank you Latina, that means so much comming from you thank you so much for the read and comments on this. Plus its a very personal peice. Love ya hun
Dawn -
aww im really glad you liked this. I enjoyed it as well. it seems to me the stuff i write on a whim turns out better than my planned peices. This was lit. a 5 min b4 i clocked in at work thing and its really personal. Thank you for the read and comment it means alot.
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Awwww this is one of your best writes. It's simply beautiful. I love your story. This really touch my heart. You made everything fit in perfectly and am sure you wrote it from the heart. which counts the most. I love what you said in your story specially the ending. AWESOME story.
Buena Suerte in the contest.-(GOOD LUCK) -
Beautifuls
Beautifuls Dawn, love how theres sorta a moral ending, and how you wove it so well into your poetry ^_^ "Since their creation the flame existed, dimly shining its light, never shedding enough to see what surrounds it. " Really like this line feels all right and what not.
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