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"You know what I really hate?"2
"I've never wanted to ask."3
"Oh, it's nothin' too bad. Maybe revolting. Depressing?"4
"I don't want to know."5
"Sure ya do."6
"No."7
"Come on, Jake. Everyone's always wanted to know what they haven't want ta know. It's pure curiosity. It's why midschoooler's these days know so much crap of the negatives."8
"Negatives?"9
"Sins. The 'grown-up' stuff of the highschools that also seem to be known in elementary. Crap's never been passed so fast before."10
"Yeah. I know, Bennen."11
"How the hell would you know?"12
"What? Why're you mad at me now?"13
"Because, you just - sorry - you just have no experience in anything... You wanna know what I hate?"14
"What?"15
"Innocence."16
"Innocence? Why?"17
"It freggin' left us... Long time ago."18
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Thought provoking
I know it's just an excersize, but I felt like I should leave a comment anyhow. Nice circuit. You worked the conversation back to where it started, but on different ground.
The wording got a bit confusing in the middle. I couldn't tell if it was typo's or awkward wording on purpose.
The subject is socially relevent. It makes me thankful for something to live by besides society's standards.
Thanks for writing!
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Thanks again for your comments.
The wording was actually intentional.
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