~~My Black Rose~~ {Chapter 1,Kidnapped}

Raven hurried down the narrow streets, it was way past her curfew, and her brother would, litteraly kill her. "Gotta hurry." she paced herself, it was midnight, the one chance she had to prove she was a responceable person, but making it home past bedtime will signal not. It was hard to shake off the feeling that someone was whaching, waiting, for her. This made every bone chill, her brain worked overtime with the sounds, she tried not to seem scared or in a hurry, that would only liven the person, make then want to hunt her down.
 He whached her make it into a small alley, he escaped his hole and hurried to catch up to her. It was difficult, trying not to make a sound, she would run, it would awaken his hunting skills, but he didnt want to bring harm to the girl, never. She was in a hurry though, you senced her heartbeat and it was insane. He silently pulled out his pistole, just to make her copperate. She turned her head slightly, then began to walk faster, he didnt want this to happen, so he pounced.
She heard someone jump and ran, only to have her land on the hard, cold, ground. "Dont move, or you'll get hurt." a rugged voice warned, she felt the tip of a gun at the back of her head. "What are you doing?!" she whispered, he just met his finger to a pressure point,she dared not to scream as everything went black.