I am >

I am here 1

You shall be consumed by fear2

So lend an ear 3

For I am 4

I fear no one 5

for before I start it's already done6

In a second I know I've won 7

For I have just begun 8

Quake in my presence 9

fear consume your very essences 10

have I yet to mention 11

I will seperate fact from fiction 12

for I am an addiction 13

for things you inhale 14

I deflect 15

a cause and reflex 16

you'll be sad we've met 17

For being the def. of sick 18

Your life clock will never again tick19

cuz fear I eat 20

and I will disturb your sleep

this is some what suckish

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  • CheetahGal
    September 27

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    this is really good!!! i think i tcould be about an addiction to maybe or maybe something you just resist doing .the title works well, I am Greater Than. Nice play on words. its not suckish


  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    September 12

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    Hm....apart from the "def." thing, I liked this. Am I mistaken or is it about addiction? I like the wording of this very much. Different from the usual cliche.

    -HT