I am Sorry

Dear Ex1

We had many great times, ups and downs, but I respected you the entire time. There wasn't a minute that went by during our relationship that I didn't love you. I always loved you, so please don't think I did not. I realized that I lyed, and I have learned my lesson. Lying is never good for a lasting relationship. So please don't hate me, please don't send me awful letters like the one you wrote for me. Please let us be friends again and talk about what went wrong. I was in tears when I read that letter, you truly hurt me. However, I realize I hurt you too, and I am very and truly sorry. I still love you, but I know you don't feel the same and I can understand completely. But, please don't ignore me, please don't hate me. Please. I love you.2

Love,3

Your Ex, Lily

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  • Kirin
    September 8

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    Just when your quote is "I'm in love"... I'm sorry if this is true. If its not, nice piece! emotional writing, though 'lyed' should be 'lied'. Other than that, I'm happy I'm not receiving this letter! BTW, Is this true?


    • CrazySouthernGirl
      September 8
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      Yes, unfortunately, this actually happened. I dated a guy for three months(which,btw, was the longest relationship ive ever been in) But, then I lied to him about some things to get myself out of a bad situation he was putting me into. ( it's very personal) and he got mad and broke up with me.


  • KixiusMaximusArsus
    September 4

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    awww sadness! This was a good piece but so sad! It has a lot of emotion in it, great job. But still so sad.