Un- Perfect World- Chapter 3

Justin lay with his back to the floor as the coach whistled and they did a sit up. This went on for about fifteen minutes before they finally halted and then did some push-ups. "Damn what the hell is this, fat camp!?!?" he thought in his head.1

Jake walked into the gym, Justin waved to him. Jake walked over to Justin smiling, "I got my schedule changed!" Justin smiled back.2

"Nice!" He replied happy.3

Jake went into the locker room to change into his PE uniform quickly and came back out. Justin looked at his legs, oddly, but he noticed they were shaved. He just shook his head and wore it off. The group in the gym went to go sit down on a large set of bleachers. Justin ran straight to Jake.4

"Uh... Why are... Nevermind" Justin said.5

Jake blinked, "Okay then."6

Justin looked around the gym, not a very big class for PE. He looked back to Jake, who was now seated. "Jake why are your legs shaved?" He asked.7

Jake looked to him, "Oh.. Well.. Um... I'm in track, and swimming and that stuff, helps reduce resistance and that kind of stuff."8

Justin just blinked, "Oh.. Okay just wondering."9

They talked on about what subjects they liked. Jake instructed Justin on what teachers to look out for, which bathrooms to not use and what lunch food to buy. Jake's mood suddenly changed to silence. A group of kids not dressed out in PE uniform walked by laughing at them, "Look at the fags, look at the fags!" they all chanted and snickered in unison.10

"Ahahahaha, so funny you made me laugh." Jake replied. Justin sat in complete silence. 11

As the group began to get all "tough" a girl with long blonde hair came up to the group. "Come on you guys, be nice." The group of boys stood googly eyed, even Justin began to be hypnotized by her.12

"Hey Jenni!" Jake replied getting up to give her a hug.13

Jenni looked over at Justin staring at her, "Um... Hi?"14

Justin blushed bright red, "Uh sorry, mind blanked out right there." He shifted in his seat.15

Jake couldn't help but laugh, "This is Justin, he is new here. Pretty cool guy."16

Jenni smiled at him, "Hey Justin, I love the name Justin." She smiled perfectly, white teeth, hair draped over her shoulder.17

Justin mumbled, "Nice to meet you Jenni."18

Jenni giggled as she ran off to play volleyball.19

Justin looked to Jake, "You two are only friends right?"20

Author notes

HEE This is getting fun

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  • Irilis4u
    October 31, 2005
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    lol, again, nice work here, I have to go to then next chapter bye bye

  • Kristen Corpse
    October 26, 2005
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    Nice Joe..*reads on*

  • LadyMidnight07
    October 17, 2005
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    the plot thickens...
    new intrigue i love it!
    off to read more


  • tieed
    October 14, 2005
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    Another interesting chapter. i agree it was rather funny. We went from a family being slaughter, to a teen boy having shaved legs. lol Nice variety.


  • ShadowFox
    June 28, 2005
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    o.o Jake ish odd...


  • Co-Co-Cola
    June 18, 2005
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    This part was funny. I like it when he noticed he shaved his legs. I was cracking up inside. keep writing!

  • Tetsuka
    March 12, 2005
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    thanks I type too fast for meh own good sometimes and skip that stuff


  • Autumn Raine
    March 12, 2005
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    awww how sweet young love!!! i love this story i cant wait for the next chapter. lol i love the line "i love the name justin" soo cheesy ya no i love you! lol

    Mercy


  • everydaysunday
    March 12, 2005
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    Good one Tet. I like stories that get their point across but aren't too long. Um, one mistake I caught though (hey I wanna be a Lang. Arts teach. What can you expect ) At the beggining Jake says he's in Track, not tack. I know you just forgot . I really like though Tet.


  • TorturedLifeandSoul
    March 11, 2005
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    This is really good. I like it. this really has me hooked. great write!

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