Justin walked out of his Math class with a stack of homework. Jake came out of nowhere saying "That's nothing compared to what Honors gets!" Justin smiled. Then he went blank.1
"So why did you freeze up when I said North Carolina?" Justin asked daringly.2
Jake froze up again, "It's... Look If I told you something would you tell anyone?"3
Justin looked at him as if he were retarded, "Oh yea I'm gonna tell the people who push, me and ALL those other people I know here." Jake felt retarded.4
Jake let out a sigh, "Okay... Well In North Carolina.. My whole family died except for my sister an I." He looked off in the distance of the hallway. "We went to go live in an orphanage but that didn't last long, we never got a family so they kicked me out, the needed space. Never heard from my sister since."5
Justin dared to ask again, "How did your family die?"6
Jake started to tear up. "We were just traveling through on our way to Washington DC. We stopped at a Burger joint to get something to eat. Out of no where a guy comes up and starts firing shots of a machine gun everywhere. It wasn't just my family who got shot at, a dozen others died. My sister and I were in the jungle gym when it happened. We walked out to find police covering up bodies. The murderer killed himself."7
Justin blinked, "Wow I'm sorry dude... My brother killed himself when he was 16, never really had anyone to look up to after that."8
Jake smiled, "Well I better get going to Science, have fun in PE."9
Justin waved, "How did he know I had PE next." He shrugged and walked on.10
Author notes
OOO I got such a good idea for a story line, here is the thing for my first chapter about North carolina, please if you can guess what the storyline is gonna be, don't spoil it for others, if your so tempted to tell just IM me 
What did you think? Please comment!
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Again, nice work, I'm hooked, and I asked myself the same thing, how did Jake know he had PE next lol.
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Alright Joe...you have me trapped xD Nicely done. Let's see what the rest of the chapters have for me to read
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still good,like the added pain(both boys have had someone die)
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Hmm interesting. That was horrible what happened to Jake. I can't imagine how i would cope...yikes. Anyhow, great job again, I didn't expect the Carolina secret to be something like that!
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Yay for this chapter! Onto next one...
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I like it! I like it! I like it! .:tries to breathe:.
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This is sad. its really good though. you still have me wanting to read more. you're very talented at writing stories. you know how to keep to reader hooked and wanting to read more. great job!
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