This characters in this story are my friends in real life and things they say and do are based on actions and responses from them in real life, so if they seem odd, or say something that doesnt quite make sense, thats why1
Foreword Chapter 12
AnneMarie- "Hi! My name is AnneMarie, im 19 and a graduate of McEachern High School."3
Carly- "Hi, I'm Carly, Im also 19 and a grad of MHS, but im in college now! yea for parties! But it always like this, AnneMarie Remember senior year? when we went to--"4
AnneMarie- "carly! I said to be breif! what do you not understand about being brief!?!"5
Carly- "hehehe, oops." 6
Chapter 17
"Hey Ami!" Carly yelled as she skipped up the driveway, brushing her hand along the side of Ami's new cherry red mustang convertible. Sighing, Ami put down her paintbrush and gently dabbed her painting with a rag dipped in oil. "Sooooo... said Carly, "Im meeting this guy for lunch, and, ... can I take your car? Puhhlleeassssee?"8
Having witnessed Carly's driving firsthand, Ami knew that Carly should not be allowed to drive anything capable of going more than 10 miles an hour, and certainly did not need to be given the keys to a mustang, if she got in that car, she would speed, and Ami's car insurance would go even higher than it already was. 9
"No, you cannot drive it. You have a car" 10
Grumbling, Carly gestured to her car, "but its a Studebaker! its old! And Ugly! And SLOW!" 11
"Its not my fault that you are a completely irresponsible driver and are incapable of driver without pressing the damn gas pedal to the floor." retorted Ami, Smugly, reflecting on her spotless driving record and perfect score on her drivers test. Sighing happily, Ami drifted off, thinking of the dream again, that perfect face, the piercing ice blue eyes that looked deep enough to drown in, the amazing body that looked as if it had been sculpted by a- 12
"AMI! AMI! AMI!" screamed Carly13
"Hmmm?" questioned Ami, still in a daze14
"We have to Go! Quit day dreaming!"15
"Go where?" Ami asked, suddenly awake, she couldn't remember agreeing to go anywhere today.16
"Ummm... its sorta a double date! I got you a date too!" Grinned Carly, swaying side to side with her hands clasped in front of her.17
"I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!" Ami shrieked, chasing Carly across the yard, nearly tripping over her Yorkie puppy, Cappi, in the process.18
"Be nice! I only did it for your own good! You need to go on a date! you've been alone too long!"19
"KILLING YOU WILL BE FOR MY OWN GOOD! THEN I WONT HAVE TO PUT UP WITH THIS ANYMORE! MAYBE I LIKE BEING SINGLE!" Ami screamed, gaining another yard when Carly tripped.20
"NOOOOOOO!" cried Carly, jumping in her car and slamming the old rusting door with a bang. Locking the doors, she cracked the window, "he likes you" Carly tried desperately, "hes seen you writing and drawing at Starbucks."21
Calming down a tad, Ami contemplated, "Really?"22
Grasping her last chance, Carly babbled away, "Yep! he sits in the corner, on his laptop, he writes too, only poems instead of stories, and, and, and, HES CUTE!" she finished, gasping to fill her lungs23
"Fine. I'll go. But I'm still pissed at you" Stated Ami24
"YEA!" shouted Carly ecstatically, opening the door and hugging Ami, "...Soo... can we take the Mustang?25
Growling, Ami smacked Carly in the back of the head but agreed to take her car.26
*a few hours later*27
Ami and Carly pulled into Arbys, Carly hanging happily out the window until Ami started to shut it on her. After stopping the car, Ami ran inside the building, laughing.28
"Hey Ann!" said Ami29
"Hey Ami" the cashier said, smiling, "here to work on your story?"30
"Nope!" Sang Carly as she danced in the door, "I hooked her up with a daaattteee!"31
"Well thank God!" exclaimed Ann, "I saw beginning to think Ami was going to die alone with a cat." Scowling, Ami stalked off to the table as the two laughed at her apparent discomfort. "Just curious", said Ann, "why doesn't she date?"32
Sighing, Carly turned serious and lowered her voice, "She dated a guy for a few years, and one day he just left, decided she wasn't enough"33
"Ahh"34
"Yeah, I keep telling her to get over it, but she keeps on moping about it."35
Ann glanced at Ami, "She'll get over it in time, when the right guy comes along."36
"Until then," Carly added, "I get to keep dragging her on blind dates!"37
"Good luck with that, we both know how stubborn she can get." 38
During the Date, Ami was completely spaced out, her date was talking, but Ami was daydreaming again, all she saw was the face from her dreams, the dazzling smile, the little scar on his neck, and she could almost hear his voice as he walked over to wh-39
"- I cant believe you! You never said a word to him on the date, you ruined it! Uhg am I just going to have to let you be alone forever?" Carly hissed in anger40
"But the dream is real!" protested Ami, "I know it is!"41
"You're delusional!" Carly screamed, "That dream is not real! He is is dream! A fantastical daydream that you cooked up in your pathetic single state!42
"Huh?" Ami sighed, starting to drift off again, not a good thing, as she was driving. As they drove down the road, Ami had drifted off to dreamland and was driving aimlessly around both side of the road. Grumbling under her breeath, carly grabbed the steering wheel before another car could hit them. The Carly saw a girl sitting patiently in the middle of the road and convinced the delusional Ami to stop.43
"Jessica?!?" Carly exclaimed "What the hell are you doing!?"44
"Waiting on a car." she replied simply, "I wanna see if itll stop! Is Ami daydreaming again?"45
"Yep. How Alec?"46
Jumping to her feet in a move that was suprising graceful for the usually very clumsy and accident prone blonde, Jessica brushed the dirt off her jeans, "Oops!" Jessica squeaked as she ran off, "I forgot to untie him!"47
"Unti- Im better off not knowing." carly sighed, forcing Ami to scoot over to the passenger side and let her drive home. After about fifteen more minutes, they arrived back at Ami's house.48
"hi." said kelsey, who was studing Ami's painting.49
"KELSEY!" screamed Carly, running from the still running car and jumping on the petite frightened goth. Kelsey stands at about 5' 2" and weight under 100 pounds, so no one blamed her for looking terrified when Carly launched herself at her,50
"I dont like touching!" Kelsey protested, "get the HELL off of me!"51
"Bagle! Squishy! Kira!!" crooned Carly, as she patted Kelsey on the head, still sitting on top of the now very annoyed brunette. 52
Sighing, Ami got out of the car, "Carly, theres cookies in the kitchen."53
Completely distracted, the blonde jumped up, tripped, ripped a hole in her shirt, and got up again and continued for the house.54
"cookies,!" Carly sang happily55
"thanks." said Kelsey as she hopped up and straightened her cosplay outfit and allowed Ami to give her a much more tame and allowed hug.56
"Momo con?" Ami asked, referring to the cosplay outfit Kelsey was wearing.57
"Yeha, it was fun, I got some good pictures this year."58
"Fun,fun, meet any guys?"59
"Nope." replied Kelsey60
"Great! Lets go tell Carly and you can be her new project."61
"Is she still dragging you on dates? I told her not to do that anymore. Mabye she needs a good whack to the head to refresh her memory." Kelsey suggested. "Is that your daydream guy?" she asked, pointing to the painting62
"yeah, the picture doesnt do him justice though," Ami sighed.63
"AHHHHH! AMI!" Carly screamed from in the house64
"Oh god." Kelsey growled "theres no telling what shes gotten into this time." Grabbing her puppy, Ami followed Kelsey inside65
"CARLY!" Ami yelled as she walked down her hallway, "Where are you?"66
"Right here!" Carly replied. Puzzled, Ami and Kelsey looked around, because it sounded as if Carly was standing right beside them67
"Where?" Kelsey asked quietly68
"HERE!" and without warning, Carly's head popped out of the wall.69
"HOLY SHIT!" Ami and Kelsey screamed in unison. Rocovering, Ami walked over and reached for the wall and felt an odd cool sensation as her hand slid through it, "Okay that is really wierd." Ami stated70
Giggling, Carly jumped back and forth into the wall and back out into the hallway.71
Still a little wierded out, Kelsey walked over th e wall and ran straight into it as if it were a wall of cement.72
"Its okie dokey Kelsey!" Carly's hand came out of the wall and patted her reassuringly on the head, "You're just defective!" she laughed as she pulled her hand back.73
Really annoyed now, Kelsey grabbed her hand and tugged, Carly, being a little stronger, tugged harded, and pulled Kelsey through the wall.74
"YEA! we're all in!" Carly exclaimed,, dancing around.75
Ami and Kelsey looked around wairly, Giggling again, carly walked to the door in the wall, "hehehe, its clear and jiggles like jello!" Carly grinned, poking it repeatedly, sending waves rippling aroun. "Ummm... Ami.... Cappi just did his buisness on that expensive rug you bought."76
Suddenly, a man appeared in the room, wearing armor and brandishing a sword covered in blood.77
Carly and Kelsey screamed and ran for the door, Ami stood, staring in wonder78
"COME ON!" Kelsey shreiked, dragging ami back through the wall79
Comments
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cool! sounds interesting so far


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Yay, it's your story!! Now you just need to write more. ^.^

