He hurt her.2
He broke her.3
He Left her to die.4
Now He's the one to pay.5
And here is her and my story.6
I watched as she focused on the moonlight. She was cold to the touch but warm at the same time. She noticed I was staring so she blushed and smiled back at me. I leaned forward and kissed her hair. I felt her heart pump faster, blood rushing to her face to a bigger blush.7
I chuckled and gave her a goofy grin. Finally I stopped her in the middle of the moon's light. I leaned in to kiss her but she beat me to the chase. Her soft lips brushed against mine and her touch was heart stopping. I felt her heart beating extra faster and I pulled away to laugh. "What?" she asked in a whisper, hoping that she didn't doing anything wrong. "Your heart beats faster around me." I declared. She was shocked but then smirked.8
"I got to go and change in to more comfortable clothes." I finally whispered. We departed our ways and I went to the men room to wash up.9
My P.O.V (I'm going to go write my nickname instead of my real name OK.)10
I waited for James to come and when he did my heart doubled over when I saw how his white face sparkled in the moon light. I loved him and I knew it. There was no denying it. Then suddenly he pulled me away back to the cool edge water. It felt good on my warm feet while we sat on the bench that hovered over the water.11
Then I felt some kind of pain that made me think that this would be the last time that I would see him. "I think you should know this. I love you. I really do. I-I want to stay with you forever. Please say that you'll never leave me in less you really want too." I I whispered to him and his face didn't show surprise to what I said. 12
"Of course I will stay with you, I'm not going to be like those other boys who lies, I love you too and I won't hurt you, I don't want too." He whispered back, giving me a slight smile. "Ooh true love. Sick." We stood up when we heard the voice.13
"Hello star, did you think that I would let you get away from me so easy? Your time is up and guess what? Your little lover boy is going to die too. Why don't you thank her James? She is going to be the death of you." Jacob whispered to us. "What do you want Jake?" I gritted through my teeth. "You out of my way." His voice cracked.14
"What can I say? Your just the girl I'm looking for." He laughed, glaring at me. He raised his gun to James but I was too late. The bullet rammed right through his heart and blood started to gush out. James fell back on to the cement. Jacob put his foot on top of James chest and shot two more times.15
Then he threw his body into the water and I screamed. Pain sprinted through me.He was gone, just like that. Then Jacob turned to me and smiled half-heartedly. "Too bad you were the death to him huh? Now it's your turn my young child." He growled, staring in to my eyes,dead serious. 16
He raised his gun again and shot me in my chest. Not once,not twice but four times in the chest, well more like three and then one ended up on my arm and I still got the scar to prove it!. My breath slowed and he knew I was still alive so he walked away saying something else that I couldn't hear.17
The thing that he didn't count on was that I was still alive. My eyes slowly closed and I drifted off. When I woke up, I was in a white room. Heaven? No I made it out while James was...Dead. I wish he lived,not me. And I still wish it to this very day.18
Two years later...19
I was getting close to be 14, I was with my best friend Chelsea at her house. Since that day I felt depression and dated more then I should have. 22 boyfriends. Didn't go so well. Well I just got over my boyfriend Caleb leaving me so I went with Chelsea to her house where we watched movies. And guess what? She warned me that her old friend was coming over and I just smiled.20
Then when I saw Jake walk through that door I almost screamed. He didn't see me but maybe it was because I was still sitting on the floor. "Star this Jacob, Jacob this is star." Chelsea replied.21
I stood up so he could see me. He half choked but said he already knew me. That's when I flipped him off and brushed past him to the bathroom.22
I started to cry softly. When Chelsea came in, she saw that I wasn't happy. She didn't know about my past, will not yet. Who knows what that boy would tell her.23
"Are you OK? Stop crying damn it or else I might cry." She laughed. I don't know why but she could always make me laugh and smile. Well I'm glad she is my best friend for life.24
Then she pushed me out so she could go to the bathroom which left me and him alone. Her parents outside in the backyard. "Hey star." He said in a quiet voice. I glared and said nothing.25
Then I noticed something he didn't want me to see. Shock filled my eyes but then I stared at him evilly. "So you like Chelsea don't you." I gritted through my teeth. He sighed and nodded.26
"Well I'll give you some advise. She doesn't date." I laughed. "I know. I've known her longer then you have." He whispered again. I was shock again. When she came out she smiled weakly at him. I could tell he didn't like her. He loved her. The same way I loved James.27
His named burn my tongue. I haven't thought of him for a while. It made me feel more sad. I wasn't going to get even in the same way. No way. I was going to tell his little love secret and see what would happen to there little bonding theme.
Author notes
My Boyfriend wrote this for me. Well my First one before he died. And he didn't finish the story. He only got one paragraph. Then I started on it. To finish it. I told exactly what happen. Right when it says "We departed our ways and I went to the men room to wash up." is when I wrote the rest. He wrote what happened when we departed and we went back on our walk. This story is heart breaking to me and Now I'm putting it on here. I-I hope you like it. This is a true story.
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my heart felt the pain... and i feel very sorry for you...if you need anything, message me... and hopefully i am there to talk to....
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I...omg...
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You had a few typos here in there, or grammar problems, but otherwise, it was quite heart-wrenching. I'm very sorry for your loss, child... I know how it feels to have someone you love dearly to be taken away from you suddenly, especially when you had believed everything to be perfect...
My sympathies are with you.


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Wow. Even more sad. This reminds me of my boyfriend who died a few months ago. Don't know what else to say. I hope things are a little better for you. Take care,
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it was a little worse than okay. i was not pulled in at all and there was some spelling mistakes. but it's all good better luck next time. -
I liked this and it's really sad. It does sound heart breaking. I'm sorry to hear that he died.
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This is really sad. How did he die, if you don't mind me asking? you don't have to answer if it dredges up bad memories.
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:(
Someone who i had been enemies for a long time killed him.
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