Creative Writing prompt: The Blues

A poem to show the saddness within my character Jayde:1

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The beast inside me rises to the surface3

As I ponder how to escape4

I feel stuck inside this empty place5

Because you suffocate my strength6

And it's killing me7

Anger rising, scarlet eyes now appear8

But it is not me you fear9

Because I am the only one scared10

That I'll never get out of here11

And it will forever kill me12

That this monster is part of me13

It has taken the whole of me14

But I don't care15

That you won't be here16

When my demon awakens 17

And takes every part of me

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