Life

We talk1

We walk2

We live3

We breathe4

We need5

We want6

We give7

We recieve8

Is it really worthy to throw your life away?

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I made this just a few weeks ago, when my friend thought she would cause suicide someday.

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  • mainebuttahfly
    August 30

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    It's meaningful

    I think you hit the nail on the head. Your poem is well written. Life is wonderful when things are going smoothly.

    Suicide is a tough thing. Although there are several factors that lead to suicide, no one can cause a suicide. Suicide is a way a person copes with a situation. It's sad that one would think that they could cause such a tragedy. I hope that if anyone out there is feeling that desperate that they would seek professional help.