Cut Me Sandman

I know you can't see
my tears of empathy,
yet still i try,
visions seeking comfort,
yet still dry.1

No one's here
to lend tear,
or wants to here,
a girl like i.2

Pain is sealed,
like a kiss,
forever scarred
onto my wrist.3

make me bleed,
for i am numb,
cut me deep,
i know i can feel.4

Submerged anger,
i'll sleep tonight.5

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again, not real. for a friend.

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  • YourPinUpDoll
    December 23, 2008
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    Hey Girlies!!


    How are you my dear??


    I have not heard from you in months!!!

    ChirstaBOB

  • Kartz
    September 4, 2008

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    "Pain is sealed,
    like a kiss,
    forever scarred
    onto my wrist."- strong words!

    Reminds of Silas in Da Vinci Code... Pain is good, monsieur, he says.

    You pen emotions very very well... Peace


  • xXBrutalRomanceXx
    August 31, 2008

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    wow i really like this. i am, after all, a poetry person. a lot of emotion. good work. even though its not really a story, ill still give ratings.

    beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 4.


  • Hinata-is-me silver member
    August 30, 2008
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    come on! how could you write this stuff. babe, you sure you're okay?

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