Just Another Crush

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“I’m bored of this. Pay attention in class next time,” the bronze-haired girl snapped into the phone.2

The dark-haired boy on the other end groaned. “I fail, I’m taking you down with me.”3

The girl snickered. “Only place I’ll be going down to will be the sidelines so I can point and laugh at you.”4

The boy winced, even as his blue eyes twinkled in amusement. “You know I like ‘em feisty and yet you still play hard-to-get. Should I be reading between the lines here?” He grinned smugly to himself. She hated it when he pulled this move.5

The girl huffed angrily. “This is one game you’ll be crying over. Anyways, my friends are making me go to that cheerleader party.” She harrumphed irritably.6

The boy laughed to himself. She was so out of the usual circle of thought that held all her friends, it was amazing she hadn't abandoned them yet.7

She was far too loyal for that, he corrected himself. "Would it make you feel better if I gate-crashed?" he asked, because, even though he was already invited, he hadn't planned on going before, knowing she hated partying with "the elite animals" and would most likely not turn up. But no point telling her his social life was on hold for her. She probably wouldn't understand.8

"If you gatecrash," she replied, "you'll spend more time tormenting than helping me."  He grinned.9

"Is it my fault you're fun to annoy?"10

She growled. "Let's see how much fun you have annoying me after I introduce you to the dial-tone."11

He snorted. "You'd die of boredom."12

"That is so true, my mind is still having issues absorbing it ," she replied, only half-sarcastically. He grinned, catching the uncertainty in her tone. Elation shot through him, hope rising.13

"See you tomorrow, babe," he added the last word, chuckling as she slammed the phone down.14

He hung up, feeling a sudden rush. A wild rush. Ecstasy. That's what talking to her felt like, like he'd had a big shot of ecstasy.15

He smiled faintly. The possibility of her ever feeling the same way . . . was just too much to hope for.  But maybe . . . he was certain there had been something there.16

***17

Does she ever think about this? he asked himself as he ran his fingers through his messy black hair, rubbing gel through it. What we could be, where this thing could go...?18

He sighed, and pulled on his black leather jacket, walked outside to his motor-bike, and revved it up. 19

He'd tried to back off, many times now. He'd gone out with a ton of girls, steeling his playboy reputation, and done a whole lot more with them than he ever wanted to. All so he could ignore the girl who drove both his heart and mind insane. 20

 Well, okay, so he’d always been a bit of a playboy. But he’d stopped wanting that lifestyle, the moment he’d met her. 21

Bashed heads more likely, he thought, grinning at the memory. They’d both been at a basketball victory party at a fellow jock’s place, and he’d wanted a dance. He hadn’t noticed her then, though her beautiful bronze hair now made him wonder what was wrong with his eyesight.22

The boy was pulled back to the present when a passing vehicle blared a song he knew well. It was oddly fate-like, even though he’d never believed that bull.23

The song had been playing when he first set eyes on her. It was incredibly cliché, but true. It drew him again into his memory of that night.24

  “...It only took that one time,25

Now you're the only thing on my mind...”26

That fateful night, he’d gone over to where she was seated with a posse of her friends and started the old charm up on her, noting that she was the only girl in this scene he’d so far never actually talked to. She was new, he’d figured. Fresh meat.27

He’d never been more wrong in his life.28

  “The old pedo down the street hit on girls better than you do,” was the first thing she said to him.29

“Well, hey, I don’t really wanna dance with some old misanthropist with the conversation skills of a hermit anyways.”30

“What makes you think I like Calvin Klein wannabes?”31

“You’re kidding me. I know you think my outfit’s hot. I can see it in your eyes. ‘S okay, every chick likes it.” He’d thrown in a smirk.32

“What you see there is disdain and embarrassment that I’m part of a female species that delusional.”33

“ . . . At least I can dance.” He’d noted she’d been seated or walking around most of the time, so he figured it would be a low blow.34

Hey, he’d never claimed to being a nice guy.35

Her response had been to leap up, stalk by him, and position herself in the center of the dance-floor, waiting until the last song ended and a new one began.36

That was when he had, quite literally, “been owned”.37

She moved like music, smoothly and beautifully, using not the usual parts a girl flaunted, like a curvy figure, but her hair, her eyes, her smile, even if it was a triumphant one as she noticed the floored look on his, and every male in the room’s, face.38

He had been pretty surprised no one had passed out. She oozed so much estrogen, even when her moves weren’t seductive. 39

Well, some girl had conked out, but only because she’d over-dozed on her boyfriend’s beer. Someone was going to get lucky tonight.40

The boy was pulled back to the present again, and cursed, as the driver raised the volume. Just what he needed. A street-crash while he was immersed in dreaming of her.41

He couldn’t even get away from her while on the road!42

But that night was firmly imprinted in his memory. After that, he’d approached her whenever he could. It was like she’d bewitched him; no matter how much she shot him down, said the exact things that would’ve ruined his day from anyone else’s mouth, he saw her as bittersweet and it tempted him. She’d eventually caved enough to strike a semblance of a friendship.43

When he finally arrived at the cheerleader’s house, the usual horde of girls ran to welcome him. Sighing, he shoved past them, eyes scanning the room purposefully.44

She was seated, as always, with a couple of her friends, laughing at something, bronze hair tied back in an elegant do, green eyes dancing.45

He made his way over, ignoring people calling his name. He paused, recalling the phone conversation, and then crouched down behind her seat cautiously.46

He flipped through his cell’s MP3 player, and settled on the right song. Then he set it on speakers, turned the volume way up and stretched his arm out so the phone’s speakers rested near her ear.47

He hit play while she remained oblivious.48

“Hey Juliet!49

I think you're fine.50

You really blow my mind!51

Maybe someday, you and me can run away.52

I just want you to know,53

I wanna be your Romeo!54

Hey Juliet!”55

The chorus of Hey Juliet burst into her eardrums and she yelped, nearly falling off her seat while the guilty male laughed hysterically to himself.56

“You pompous arse,” she spat angrily, green eyes flashing. He gave her a smug grin, giving her a gentle shove so he could sit down.57

“I feel so loved.” 58

Her eyes darkened to an emerald shade and his breath caught in his throat; he was suddenly unable to look away.   59

At least, until she reached out and caught his ear in a vice-like grip. He let out a silent yelp as she twisted the poor cartilage.60

“Hey, ow!61

She only smirked. 62

He wasn’t about to let her get one over him. Ignoring the stares of her friends, he slipped his arm around her and yanked her hair back. She grimaced as her head tilted backwards, but still didn’t let go.63

She wouldn’t have been her if she’d given up. But he was nothing if not pig-headedly stubborn either.64

He grinned and leaned over so his lips brushed her ear as he whispered, “I’m hoping all those hours you spent doing your hair don’t burn when I’ve destroyed it.”65

His insides jumped when he felt her shiver slightly, but all she did was turn her head, now nose-to-nose with him, and remark, “I hope you don’t mind not being able to hear all your fangirls after I’ve ripped your ears off. Bit of a blow to the ego, huh?”66

He grimaced, even though he was only half listening; her presence was so powerful. It overwhelmed him, heat radiating from her small form from this close, emerald eyes hypnotizing. So mesmerizing . . .67

She snapped him out of the daze by twisting his ear about ninety degrees. He cursed, pulling back from her and exhaling as her aura faded. On a knee-jerk reaction, he yanked her hair-clip off, feeling silky tendrils of bronze curls slip between his fingers. The girl in question gave a horrified gasp, but he noted absently that even the shocked look only added to her honest appeal as her hair tumbled down her shoulders, uncurling out of its tight prison, striking against her fair skin and smoldering eyes.68

Which were now narrowed in a glare directed at him. He gave her a beguiling smile, and her eyes flickered, indecision flashing weakly through.69

While she mused, he reached out, twisting a bronze strand between his fingers. He tugged it gently and she shook her head, pulling back, swatting at his hand. 70

“First you ruin it, now you’re trying to bald me?” she snapped in her usual endearing way. He raised an eyebrow.71

“I’d rather spare my virgin eyes the sight of you bald,” he replied dryly. It was something he’d never have said to any other girl, but it just worked with her. He knew he’d scored a point when her jaw clenched.72

“A playboy with virgin eyes, huh? There’s something I’ve never seen before,” she said cuttingly. She reached up to pull her hair back with a scrunchie from her wrist.73

Impulsively, he grabbed her wrist, tugging her hand back down. She gave him a questioning look.74

“It looks better that way,” he muttered, softly, barely noting how she caught her breath at the unintended husky note in his voice. Her penetrating gaze was on his again, unbreakable no matter how hard he tried. He found himself being irresistibly drawn to her again.75

A sudden silence broke the trance between them. The wild song had stopped; someone had requested a slow song to end the evening.76

“Wanna dance?” he asked, a challenge in his voice. She would read it, he knew. Her eyes twinkled in confirmation of this as she nodded.77

The opening soft tones of the song began as he led her to the dance floor.78

“I love this song,” she murmured as he slid his arms around her slender waist, pulling her closer. He smiled faintly, finding it ironic that this was the song he’d been humming in his subconscious for a while now.79

“ . . . Do you ever think, when you’re all alone,80

All that we could be, where this thing could go?81

Am I crazy or falling in love?82

Is it really just another crush? . . .”83

This was no crush, he saw that now. Her arms slipped around his neck and his heartbeat accelerated in response. She raised her head so their eyes met, searing blue to hypnotic green. The lyrics flowed through his mind until he realized, as they circled the room once more, he was singing them, softly, true, but loud enough that she heard, and was listening, eyes lost in thought.84

“. . . Do you catch a breath, when I look at you?85

Are you holding back, like the way I do? . . .”86

She swallowed as he lowered his head, his breath tickling her lips as he sang in his husky voice, forehead resting against her so their faces were level. He could hear her breath coming in small pants now, yet she still trained her eyes resolutely on his. That was fine by him; he could’ve died and not noticed it as long as he could stare at her this way and have her not look away like she always did.87

“. . . Cause I’m trying, try to walk away,88

\But I know this crush ain’t going away, going away . . .”89

She shivered suddenly and his arms tightened so she was pressed closer to him, her small form fitting easily in his arms. She always came on as a cold Amazon Warrior, but it was only a shell. He pitied the idiots who hadn’t bothered to figure that out. This girl was worth breaking through walls for.90

“. . . Has it ever crossed your mind when we were hanging91

Spending time girl, are we just friends?92

Is there more, is there more? . . . ”93

She bit her lip and he swallowed, watching as it reddened. Her eyes were suddenly clouded, troubled, but she made no move to look away as he sang on.94

“. . . See it’s a chance we’ve gotta take,95

Cause I believe we can make this into96

Something that will last, last forever, forever . . .“97

The song had influenced him, was his only excuse, as he abruptly leaned down and pressed his lips against hers.98

His insides were suddenly on fire, passion that he’d long since buried running alive through him as his hands worked their way through her long mane, caressing her; her soft lips manipulative under his. His heart thumped madly, longingly, inside him as she made no move to push him away, her hands digging into his shoulders as she responded. Her lips tasted tantalizingly like cherry, and even though he’d forgotten to breathe, he couldn’t pull himself away, instead leaning forwards and deepening the moment.99

And then the song ended. Both broke apart, realization dawning as they took in the stares of their fellow partiers. Her cheeks reddened and she pulled away, but he’d made up his mind. The worst had already happened, and   now he couldn’t back off; he was in too deep. He tugged her back towards him and she hesitated, still perturbed.100

“I—I—” For once, she had no smart comeback. He smirked at the irony, lacing his fingers together behind her back.101

“I’ll make it easy,” he said, glad his voice betrayed none of his rushing emotions. “Wanna go out with me?”102

She blinked, bewildered, and then raised an eyebrow. She’d always been quick to recover.103

“I’d have thought you’d at least do it in some floor-me-to-defeat way,” she commented, fingers playing with the lapel of his jacket. He waited patiently.104

“But take what you get, so sure,” she added, a shy smile breaking over her face.105

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Author notes

Yes, not as impressive as some of my other stuff, sorry, but I needed to write something light to ease my mind.

For Contest Who Wants a Prompt? Again... by Inkling, prompt given was song Love Like This by Amy Pearson. I did it from a guy's perspective instead.

For Contest Inspire Me II by xxxWhisper-Sorrowxxx: option 2, romance.

For Contest Picture Prompts *yay* by EZlats option #1: Someone loves someone without the other person knowing about it.

For Contest Anything And Everything by Finger-Eleven. Option 2; Romance.

For Contest Picture Prompt Contest by Out-Of-Eden picture DANCE.

xx♥xx

Okay, first off I blame the SW counter for being amateur. It's showing a 2492 word story (MS Word) as 2800!

I wrote this story, listening to a certain playlist that consists of most of the songs in the options. ^_^ Yes, I'm obsessed with Crush. I was planning on writing a story on this anyway. XD

Songs used:

- Hey Juliet - LMNT

- Just The Girl - The Click Five

- Rush Together - Quietdrive (this isn;t so apparent, but the whole never-noting-her before part was inspired by this)

- Feel Your Love - Jady

- Crush - David Archie ♥

Let me know what you think.

xx HT xx

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  • Orimis
    1 day ago
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    Oh. My. God.

    This is easily one of the best romance pieces that I have ever read. Has your work been published yet? No? Why the hell not?

    The diction you used to describe Romeo and Juliet here just WORKED. They are fully developed as characters, and your style supports them well and provides superb imagery. This is, as one commenter said, a very accomplished story.

    If this story is any indication of the quality of the rest of your work, I think I'm going to be spending a few blissful hours wandering your SW profile.

    *sighs at "This girl was worth breaking walls for."*

    THANK YOU for entering my contest!


  • Scarlet Of Dreams gold member
    November 22
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    Well..I think I've already commented on this once, HT. But this is by far one of my fav storys you have written.
    Goodluck~


  • Toxic Paradox gold member
    November 22
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    'a big shot of ecstasy' - do you mean the drug? If so, he would probably be swallowing it rather than shooting it; it generally comes in pill form.

    The only thing I could find technically 'wrong' with this is the phrase 'over dozed' where I think you meant 'over-dosed'.

    This is a really accomplished story, with a happy ending - in my opinion, most of the best stories have happy endings. My only real suggestion would be that you strip back some of the language - while there is nothing wrong with your sentences, some of them might be better off simpler. If you would like me to give you some examples feel free to IM me.

    Overall, I think this is a very well-crafted piece of work, and all my suggestion (which is only my opinion, after all) would do is perhaps improve the rhythm a pace.

    -Jess.


  • youxarexthexmoon silver member
    November 16

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    Ha! I remember Hey Juliet. And someone slipped the lyrics to Just The Girl in my locker last week. I think I know who it is. This was freakin' adorable. Well written and some of the things she said made me laugh. Nice work.


  • mylivingmelody
    November 15
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    Amazingly sweet, I wish I could write as well as you.


  • Inkling
    November 15

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    Awesome story, even if this is the second time I read this. I was reading, and I was like, "This sounds familiar." Still awesome.


  • BlueWave
    November 14

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    Nice!

    Your story was very romantic, but not in a cheesy way. It was also very interesting, holding my attention, and very well-written.=)=)


  • georgiaz
    November 14

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    ok
    i just re-read it

    although it didnt make me cry
    it is my type of story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • georgiaz
    November 13
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    cool

    very good


  • WanderingKiKi
    November 11

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    I was looking for something to ease my mind cause I'm feeling a lot of out of sorts. This did the trick, I might not be my old self again but somehow i feel better. I like the way she plays hard to get in the beginning, how she insists she isn't gonna become another one of his 'girls'. Yet they are drawn to each other from the very get go. The way you let emotion show itself in the write is wonderful. I haven't completely mastered it so it flows like you did with this but I'm trying. You did good. Thanks for the enlightenment.


  • crazypeanut555
    November 7
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    i like this story alo


  • Inkling
    November 5
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    I love the song Crush. It was so awesomeful~ Something that could happen in real life, hmmhm. I liked it. ^-^


  • Princess Dawn
    November 5

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    wow wowwww lots of trophies for this one. This is somethign that really started to cheer me up. The boy and girl on the hpone so reminds me of me and my boyfriend and it actually made me laugh instead of be sad. Good luck in my contest!


  • Out-Of-Eden
    November 5

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    Oh my gosh no!! Why did it end?? Wow. That was just..wow. It was brilliant, wonderful, beautiful, full of emotion! Wow. Man, you really had me hooked. I did NOT want it to end. You really portrayed the characters' emotions well, so well in fact that I warmed to both characters instantly. And I also noticed something. No names were mentioned at all. Now that takes talent, to write about two characters whose names are not even mentioned the entire time. I almost forgot! The emotion that the guy felt for the girl was so..real, so true. I loved it! This was a wonderful read! I am bookmarking this. Great job!!!


  • Aelphaba Atticus
    November 2

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    I thought this was cute. The characters were very real and the plot understanable for a high school/college setting. You've done a nice jon with you mechanics and flow and I can't really find much to critique. Excellent.


  • Simply Beautiful
    October 24
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    Ah, I'm really sorry but you won a medal in one of my previous contests. Could you please take it out so the other writers have a chance to earn a medal? Thank you. :]

  • Taliesa
    September 27

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    Well written

    This is very believable dialogue that flows and carries the reader along--to a point. The blow-by-blow detail gets me bogged down after a while. These are interesting characters--the girl more than the boy--so I'm involved, but not all that involved in this narrow plot. Skip some of the play-by-play and, for more realism, add more physical self-awareness to the boy's thinking.

    . Rewarded 6


  • ainshbu
    September 27
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    oh i already commented its still awsome.

  • mcfreeman
    September 27

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    I liked it...

    like the idea that the music influenced him...that is a theme that needs more exploring...very enjoyable read...

    . Rewarded 4

  • MajorTom
    September 27

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    This was on the lighter side but I was surprised at how articulate it was. The interactions with your characters was really noteworthy. In fact, your characters in general were really nicely handled. Lastly I'll say you managed to capture a fleeting piece of teenage culture here. Good work.

    . Rewarded 6


  • Blackeye3825
    September 26
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    wow i loved it and you stayed true to your thoughts and what you felt


  • Colors Of The Moon
    September 26

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    Wow! Good Job! that was really good! I really liked it!


  • Mel-the-Believer
    September 24

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    Awww, this was really cute. I've listened to both songs mentioned in this story, at least I think there was only two. This was really great story. I loved it. Wonderfully written. Thank you so much for entering. Good luck in the contest. God Bless!


  • LittleMissChrissie
    September 20

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    Very nicely done! You could tell that the characters really had some chemistry from the first few lines, so well done! Not too mushy, either, and you kept it realistic. I loved that the girl was sarcastic towards the guy and it was very good.

    No spelling/grammatical errors so far as I could see. Well done.

    Very best of luck in the contest!

    Chrissie

  • over-dozed.. you meant over-dosed didn't you?
    Anyway, I love the way they react to each other, it adds the perfect touch of humour, and how it ended up pulling them together. It's really well written, especially the detailed parts with emotion. It really takes alot of practice to pull that off so well.
    Thanks for entering!! and good luck!!!


  • Trillian
    September 11

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    This is very sweet. It's different than a lot of other ones I've read, and I like it =P Keep it up
    ~Trillian~


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 11

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    Haha, I thought of Crush, by David Archuleta while reading this story, hehe, it's a great song. well, great story, well written with strong character development. I like it, good job =DD

    -Dani


  • quicksilver moon
    September 7

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    I like the characters in this story, especially the feisty, somewhat sarcastic heroine. You make a dance seem so much more intense and romantic. A very enjoyable read with great conversations


  • tiffikins
    September 5
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    I really enjoyed this.
    It was easygoing and playful.


  • DeathNoteYaoi
    September 5
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    Nice HT i like it i wanted to read more and more .but well done ^^ XD


  • Scarlet Of Dreams gold member
    September 5
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    Awesome

    Aw man did it really have to end? I loved it! I want to know what happens while their going out. I loved this short story, once again good work HT.

    -Alex

    . Rewarded 4

  • Kartz
    September 5
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    Fantastic!

    Amazing description... Vivid and capturing! I loved the way the character has been sketched in this work. The feel, the emotions... And the songs you have used fit in just fine. The flow is superb and the characters gel pretty well.

    I wish you luck in the contests!

    Peace.

    . Rewarded 6


  • StreetRoller
    September 5

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    This was a very nice piece of work. I liked it alot. The ending was what we all expected, a happy one. Its very interesting. Good job!

    . Rewarded 4


  • eleno
    September 5

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    i cant belive you only got one trophy for this
    I loved this story!!.. i think this kind of story can be easily written as too girly and silly.., but the way this was written and the emotions that are shown so clear.. it pur butterfliues in my stomach..!! It was so serious and funny at the same time! And very respectable, since you have been promoting a way of behavior for girls which is very rare these days..(thanks)
    And the lyrics you chose were perfect! i loved this story. thank you so much for writing it.

    . Rewarded 8


  • ainshbu
    September 4
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    So sweet and emotionally felt.


  • Radiance
    September 1

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    Lord, this is amazing. So beautiful, so real. The girl in this story is so admirable; I loved how you described her dancing. (Not many girls can be so attractive without flaunting themselves. )

    Your writing style is so effective for this piece. The protagonist's emotion was superb, and I could feel every moment between the two main characters. It was awesome. And the songs were all so fitting, too.

    These characters go so well together; you wrote them so naturally, and it's like they're exactly meant for each other. It's not one of those "You're hot, and I'm hotter. Wanna date?" pieces of crap that I loathe so completely. It was real, it was vivid, it was fantastic.

    Thank you so much for sharing, and good luck in those contests!


  • Simply Beautiful
    September 1

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    L-O-V-E it! I love how the girl is witty and sarcastic to the one guy. I love how he is actually in love with him. It's wonderful.

    I have a couple itches:

    The first three paragraphs sort of confused me. Maybe elaborate more on that.

    '“ . . . At least I can dance.” He’d noted she’d been seated or walking around most of the time, so he figured it would be a low blow.

    Hey, he’d never claimed to being a nice guy.' Para. 34 I think those should be one paragraph.

    'Well, some girl had conked out, but only because she’d over-dozed on her boyfriend’s beer. Someone was going to get lucky tonight.' Para. 39 Sorry, I don't know what this sentence is supposed to be doing in your story.

    '“It looks better that way,” he muttered (no comma here) softly, barely...' Para 74.

    'He pitted...' Para 89. Pitted? Pitied?

    '...eyebrow/.' Para 102. You probably know what's up here. :]

    Other than that, I love this story. It's sweet yet has some sass in it. The plot is solid, hardly any grammar or spelling issues, you followed my rules, kudos for you!

    Thanks for entering my contest and good luck! Oh, I love your style of writing now. :]

    Cheers,
    Sky♥Prince


    • Tiger-Lily gold member
      September 1
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      Lol, thank you for catching the typos. ^^ As for the other stuff:

      For para 34, I wanted to emphasize this effect, so it's alright if I use a new para for it.

      Para 39, yes, it really does not go with the story at all, but he's a teenage guy. He notices stuff like this. I had to show some background. It can't be all mush.

      Para 74, it's fine with a comma. It's actually the correct way of doing this, but rarely used. XD, adding a comma before an adverb, but most people fear comma overuse so don't bother with it. I'm a grammar Nazi, though.

      Alright, I revised. ^_^ Thanks for catching those. I tried going over it again...and again. No more typos, hopefully.

      Thank you for reading!

      HT

  • This girl was worth breaking through walls for

    How does it feel to be loved by so many people, your stories charm, influence, entertain and enchant them so much and they want to grow up to be like you?

    Cause that's exactly how I see you everytime I read your stories or just talk to you (yes, including the last part, lol XD) I can't type anymore than just that I loved this and hope you continue writing as beautiful as you always do!

    ~*Princess*~


  • Aralinn
    August 30

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    =D

    Wow that girl reminds me of how i treated the guy that liked me, but i wasn't sure about him. Man i was soo mean to him lol. of course now we have been dating for a year and a half.

    Great story and very well written. The plot line is good, realistic to how things can be.

    Ala