Eva heard it again,a noise in the bedroom. She reopened her eyes, but shielded them this time from the beaming morning sunlight. She sat up straight in bed as her eyes adjusted to her surroundings. Her body was aching and she felt weird. Eva saw someone big moving around the bedroom quietly, at least trying to be quiet.2
"Dad? What are you doing in here?" Eva whispered trying not to wake up Alex. When she looked besides her, she didn't see him. She thought it was odd.3
"Where did Alex go?" She asked.4
Matt turned around suddenly, and when he saw Eva his cheeks turned red.5
Eva felt a chill on her body, and she followed her fathers stare. She looked down and saw her breasts. They were just out there. Eva gasped, her lips trembled and her eyes welled up when she noticed fresh red finger prints on her pale flesh. She swallowed and cleared her voice.6
"Where did Alex go?" Eva asked, a little bit more stern this time.7
"He went out a few hours ago, to bring something for breakfast." He replied, staring at Eva's breasts as he bit his lower lip.8
Eva quickly got up, wrapping the sheets around her. She walked quickly towards the door, and it was just then she felt it. Between her legs she felt an excess of wet moisture. Eva cried out as she reached for the door, pulling it open.9
It didn't work, it was locked. She took a deep breath and looked at her dad. She tried to not look afraid as she unlocked the door and ran to the bathroom. She tripped on the sheets, so she just let them fall as she ran into the bathroom.10
She locked herself in there as she quietly cried. She looked down and touched her thigh, it was warm, the wetness. She cried louder. Matt had raped her while she was asleep, Eva was sure of it. Eva began to grab at her hair as she fell to the floor, just laying there on the cold tile while she was naked. Her entire body was trembling. He ruined it for her, he ruined it.11
Last night Eva had made love to Alex for the first time. She was suppose to be overjoyed today, but her dad ruined it for her. How could he do this to her? Eva began sobbing. She was shrieking as her lips trembled. She was having a hard time breathing. Eva felt dirty, she hadn't felt like this since she was a little girl.12
"Oh God, why?!" She screamed out loud, at the top of her lungs.13
Eva pounded her fists onto the freezing tile. She pounded on the floor till her fists turned bright red. Just like the bright red marks on her breasts she thought to herself, disgusted. She placed her hands on the floor below her and tried to get up. She stumbled when she was up. She used the floor for support because she wasn't able to stand up straight. Eva heard a dripping sound. Looking at the faucet, she didn't see anything. When she saw the shower curtains, she slowly made her way to the bathtub. The dripping was coming from there. Eva turned on the hot water, just the hot water.14
Eva made her way into the shower. Her body felt numb, so the scalding water didn't seem to affect her. She stood under the falling water and began scratching at her body with her long black nails. She couldn't stop trembling, couldn't stop crying.15
Why did Alex leave her alone with her dad? Didn't he know he shouldn't have done that, Eva thought. No, he didn't know. She never told him HER family history. She never let him know it was more fucked up than he thought. Eva made herself stop blaming Alex. He was her only friend in this world, her only friend.16
Eva jumped and slipped, falling down hard. She heard a knocking at the bathroom door, and it terrified her. She brought her knees up and wrapped her arms around them, rocking herself back and forth, still under the water.17
She hoped it was Alex, but when she heard the door slam open she knew it wasn't. The curtains flew off the rack, and she knew it was her worst fear. It had come alive, again. 18
"No! Please don't do this!" she shrieked, her hands thrashing through the air, keeping her face faced away from her dad.19
"Please don't, please, dad please!"20
Eva saw him take his clothes off. His fat legs stepped into the bathtub, and eventually, his entire body was in the tub. He was in there with Eva, both naked. Eva began to tremble uncontrollably as she tried to get up. Her legs wouldn't seem to support her, she was a prisoner in her own body.21
Matt got under the water and he screamed.22
"Mother fucker!" He screamed when the burning water touched him. He jumped out and added the cold water. A grinning Matt re-entered the tub as he sat on his knees in front of Eva. 23
"Come here you bitch." Matt said, getting aroused at the sight of a naked, wet Eva.24
Matt grabbed Eva by the shoulders and pinned her down beneath him. She wasn't able to move, not even an inch. Her head was shaking violently from left to right. Eva choked on the water that feel straight into her face.25
"That's right, choke you bitch." He told her, laughing.26
Matt forced his lips onto Eva's as he kissed her hard, his tongue swarming her mouth. He lifted his head up and looked at Eva's face as she stuck himself inside of her, and he watched as her eyes bulged out in horror. She was terrified, and that aroused him even more.27
"Oh, Oh scream. Scream like you screamed with Alex. I want you to pleasure me Eva. Pleasure me like you pleasured Alex." Matt said, not a bit of regret hinted in his voice.28
"I heard you last night, I heard your every single moan. I went outside and climbed a ladder to watch you through the window. You really do need curtains for the window, I could see every little detail. I saw Alex rolling you around, I saw you riding him, thrusting him." Matt continued, he remembered the images as he raped Eva.29
"I pleasured myself to the sight of you getting fucked. You're a whore like your mother was." Matt spit in Eva's face and slapped her. He climaxed inside of her, and he punched her face. The punch was the breaking point for Eva, for she suddenly passed out. Her body lay ed beneath his, and she was ever so still.30
"Shit." Matt said, getting himself off of her.31
He picked her up and threw her over his shoulder. He slapped her ass and he laughed like a mad man. He walked out of the bathroom, leaving the shower running.32
He walked into the bedroom where Eva and Alex slept in last night. Matt threw Eva's body onto the bed and got back on top of her. He kissed her lips, and her neck. He was disappointed that she was passed out, and she couldn't struggle, trying to move her body from under his. Matt began to bite at Eva's nipples. He was ready to re-enter Eva's passed out body. He had spread her legs, looking at her entrance and enjoying the view.33
Matt heard a loud bang behind him. His shocked face turned around as he saw him standing at the doorway. He looked into his green eyes which flashed with anger. They looked like ice green. Matt stood up in his naked wet body, ready to take on a furious Alex.34
Author notes
This is one of the most disturbing chapters I've written so far, and will write in the future. I stated in an earlier chapter that Eva was raped by her "dad". I decided to add a chapter to show his horrific actions.
Chapter 1: http://storywrite.com/Story/1081980
Chapter 2: http://storywrite.com/Story/1083786
Chapter 3: http://storywrite.com/Story/1085652
Chapter 4: http://storywrite.com/Story/1087150
Chapter 5: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1089052
Chapter 6: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1091483
Chapter 7: http://storywrite.com/Story/1093640
Chapter 8: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1097544
Chapter 9: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1099811
Chapter 10: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1103543
Chapter 11: http://storywrite.com/Story/1106082
Chapter 12: http://storywrite.com/Story/1108021
Chapter 14 coming very soon!
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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This.. I...This was my favourite chapter so far. I'm actually speechless.. Everything was so...
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this part is so horrible...but so well written. its really graphic, and you can feel the emotion of the characters. i liked this part, and cant wait for alex's reaction
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I hope Alex beats him really good, that is whe worst thing Matt could have done, I dont' feel bad for Matt anymore. I hope he gets the crap beat out of him....
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I hope Alex beats the shit out of Matt., Matt deseves it. off to read the next one.
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eeesh this was disturbing. i can kind of relate to what Alex was feeling though, because my girlfriend was raped a year ago(before i realy knew her), and when she told me what had happened to her i almost asked her to tell me who he was so i could go and cut his balls off myself, because it angers me so much to think that a guy could have that little respect for a girl and want to do that to her. if i knew who he was, he would be a dead man. what makes me feel even worse reading this piece is the fact that its her father that rapes her.
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WOw...... I don't really know what to say... I do not usually read this type of stuff at all but I was captured by your words and had to finish it. My dad started molesting me when I was only 5 years old and this brought back vivid memories, not so good memories. You did an excellent job writing this, you have good word usage and everything. ~Melissa♥
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It Cage doesn't kill Matt, I will. What a sick twisted fuck, men like him make me sick. As I read this, I wanted to vomit, it was so detailed... I almost cried! Everything made me sick and I felt dirt after reading this too. lol, I guess that it a good thing. Making it detailed, make the reader feel what the character is feeling, that is good writing. Even though it was on something very wrong and twisted, it was still a great write.
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fucking fantabulous, Undescribably great
OMG this was awesome. I loved this you soooooooo have to add the next part soon. man I hope alex kills that dickhead Matt. He is such an ass. poor eva...great write. plz add more soon. I love this. Great write and you are a very talented writer.
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ohmigod. this is awesome but so damn scary. it scared the shit outta me. god its fukin mental to think someone could do that... sorry wow this is wicked keep at it, looknig forwards to more! but i gotta go ttyl
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wow..i hope alex beats the shit out of matt...and maybe even kills him..i dont like that guy..he is very nasty!!! cant wait for the next one..keep up the good work!
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I'd say it was disturbing.. But I guess you kinda had to write it to show how much of a bestard he is. I hope Alex kills him.. that'd be great, even though it is also really sad. You can differently do a lot of things from this point. Great job setting up your story line!
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omg! thats so horrific and so graphic!! that must have been very hard to write!
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great
wowwwwwwww this is sooo sad!!!! I can't believe this happened! i never expected it! wow!!! awesome!!!
It's scary because what Matt does to his daughter happens in real life to and i think that's the scariest thing of all. wow, i cant believe he did that, it's sick. i feel sorry for Eva even though she's not alive! Wicked job and keep it up
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I hope Alex beats the hell outta Matt.....kills him....stupid mofo...that p/m/o (sorry I get into this stuff like a religious thing)







