Let's coutine where we stoped. 1
"I'm going to kill you Shika"."Gaara you promised",yelled Temari.All of a sudden Kakashi,Gai,Asuma,Kurenai,Anko,Shizune, and Lady Tusnade walked in."Oh hi girls your".The senshis jaws dropped."Your pregnate",screamed the senshis."Yes we are"."We're going to be fathers",yelled the boys."Oh wow",said the senshis."T..Te...Ten-Ten"."S..Sa..Sakura"."I...Ino"."H....Hi..Hinata"."T....Te..Temari"."Oh just save it,I know you wanna break up because you don't want to be a daddy,but listen you are you to help me take care of the this child"!!!!!!!"B..but"."I said save it"."How are you going to tell me all of this,with out even hearing my side of the story",yelled Shika pointing at Temari."Shika cool it,leave them alone clearly they are going nuts from the mood swings",said Neji and Sauske."You two really are heartless jerks",yelled TenTen and Sakura."We are not heartless jerks"."Oh yes you are and we bet your going to pretend like you don't even know us once we have these kids."Whatever",yelled Neji and Sauske."Guys,guys juat cool it",said Kiba."Your acting like you don't want to rejet me too,Kiba",said Ino."Ino just shut up for a sec",said Kiba."What,who the heck do you think your talking too",yelled Ino."P..P..Please calm down girls",said Hinata softly."H..Hinata I..I",said Naruto."Please Naruto I..I... don't want to fight".All of a sudden out of no where Gaara get's up and yells "Shika I'm still going to kill you".Gaara gets up and punches Shika in the face.Shika goes slamming into a wall."Gaara',yells Temari."Oh God",yells TenTen.The the girls ran out the room crying.Very distrubing silence."Ummmmmmmmm I think I'm going to check on the girls".All the lady senshis leave the room and go check girls.(Note:Still in the breakfast room where the boys are)."You know you guys really have to think about this",said Kakashi."Think about what"?"What you guys are going to do about this baby"."Were going to take care of them and the girls"."Good"."So why don't you go clear up everything with them."Oh yeah and Gaara I suggest you say something to Shikmaru"."Sorry Shika"."It's ok Garra".Shika,Kiba,Naruto,Sauske,and Neji leave the room to check on the girls.(To NejiTen).(Note:Neji and TenTen share a room).2
In NejiTen's room:3
Neji stands outside the room for a few minutes.Anko comes out and sees neji and tells him to not mess up with TenTen.Neji walks in the room and sees TenTen laying down with a pillow over her face crying.Neji sits down on the other side of the bed and lays down.TenTen stops crying for a while and then peeks one eye out from under the pillow."Oh it's you",she says angrily.Then she gets up and opens the door to leave the room."You know I love you right",says Neji.TenTen's eyes widened.He gets up wraps his arms around TenTen and says "I planned on taking care of the baby once you said I was the father,at first I thought you had cheated on me,I was so happy when you asid I was the dad"."Oh Neji I would never cheat on you".Lady Tusnade walks past and peeks in."Hey why don't you two close the door".Lady Tusnade shuts the door."Neji I",before she could finish she felt Neji's lips pressing up against her's.She closed her eyes and let Neji lay down her down on the bed.(Well let's leave them alone)4
To ShikaTema's room5
Shika walks in the room and trys to hug Temari."Just because i'm pregnate dose,net mean I won't attack you with my fan.Shika still gose in the hug her.Temari simles.Inner Temari:So he's not to lazy to try and hug me even though I just threathened to attack.She feels Shika hugging her."Oh Shika"."Are you going to really help me with my baby."Our baby".He gently kisses her on her forhead."Troublesome women".They start to kiss.(Awwwwwwwwwwwww,let's leave them alone)6
Author notes
I think I did alot better on this chap than the first one.
Please tell me if you like.I will coutine part 3 later
Comments
-
You have a grat idea and I like it. But you also had a lot of spelling wrong and it was still somewhat confusing. I also like the temari threat.
