There once was a rat as big as a cat , It sits on a mat and acts like a brat he loves to eat and sleep and play he sits around being lazy all day.1
Silly Sally went to the beach,2
Silly Sally had a icecream,3
Sally loves to eat grass and her puppy,4
Silly Sally sat on a mat.
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... OK... This was very... Random.
And Sally loves to eat her puppy? Wow.
And many things happen with a group of friends and you're trying to be random at times. But this is very interesting...
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'Sally loves to eat grass and her puppy' did she eat her puppy?? lol, cute rhymes, hehe, keep it up =DD
-Dani -
That's funny
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o__o This is odd. XDD Lol, but amusing. You do have a pronoun change, where you use "it" and then "he". Careful on that. ^^
-HT -
Wow! You would write something like this wouldn't you DNY?
Anyway, I was sooo bored, so I decided to read it while clapping my hands. ^.^ I was really bored when I got back up! I hope the rats don't look like the kitties or they ARE the kitties in disguise! o.O That would be freaky... and funny!
♥ Nancy ♥
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lol me and my friends made this in school for a game so it might sound very odd indeed lol
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haha that's funny
-Snow -
ok...
think you should make it more interesting. The correspondence will definetly be off if you don't make it more interesting than what you're making it. To tell you the honest truth, it sounds like something a Middle School 6th grader would write.
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lolZ....
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