Forgotten Tink

"And I give you my heart."1

Is it possible to give something so important away, even if it is only figuratively. I know I did....I gave my heart to the man of my dreams...and as he walks away to live in a new town I can feel it filling up and drowning itself with questions and sadness. 2

Will he still call? What if he meets some one new? Would he give me up for some one prettier? What would happen if he decided to stay there forever? Can he still come to prom? What about my birthday? What about his birthday? We had some many plans...what will happen to those?3

But truly I know, if he loves me how I love him he will not go away forever. He knows how I feel, and in my soul and mind I know he feels the same. But my heart has been wounded and broken before so still it worries and questions what it shouldn't need to.

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  • Reaver Greeters member
    August 31, 2008

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    This rang kind of sad to me but was clear and full of honest thought! Great work and thanks for entering! You did great! Rian


  • loyda
    August 29, 2008

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    awww

    such troublesome thoughts!

    i guess that if our pal here LOVES you, he won't be changing you for some cuter girl!
    and if you are not sure that he LOVES you, then that's a problem!

    i liked this though. you write really well!