The day my heart died....but didn't?!?! (short)

As i sit here in my school uniform and my black army combat boots there is something wrong!!!1

My cheeks are staind with tears of pain...2

I hurt him...3

But i had to!!!4

My heart is broken..5

It lays just beneath my skin..6

Torn to shreds but still whole..7

I'm hurting harshly..8

And yet i'm still loving fully..9

Why must i feel this way?10

It would be easier if i jest went away...!!!11

I'M NUMB!!!12

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i dont know peeps..how was this thingy?...short i know but ay things aren't always pages long, sometimes it only take's a few words to make the point.

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  • Well, that was an interesting poem you have written. It was hard for me to see it, but I got it.

    Now, this was thought out well. I like the way you wrote that your heart was torn to shreds, yet it's still whole in your body. You must of had it rough.

    But awesome poem!

    ♥ Hisana ♥


  • Darkess gold member
    August 29

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    I recieved your point. I think

    So you broke up with your boyfriend...?

    Maybe I just suck at reading between the lines