Never Give Up (Chapter 4)

"April you didn't have to do that for me"1

"I know but I made you a promise and I just hope you follow through."2

"I am'3

"Good because we are leaving now, I don't want anything else to happen to us."4

April and Katelyn loaded their stuff up in the car. They were about to enter it when Katelyn's phone went off.5

Katelyn: "Hello"6

Person" YA WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU??!?!?"7

Katelyn: " Oh hey dad,I was just visiting April,we are going to finish watching this movie and I will be home."8

Person: "Well you better make it fast, you were suppose to be home 2 hours ago. I warned you,so you know what's going to happen now don't you?"9

Katelyn: "Yes sir,I understand"10

Person: " Good,now you better hurry or I will make sure your little friend gets brought into this too."11

Katelyn: " I will be home soon sir,bye"12

Person: "Bye"13

"Katelyn are you going to be o.k?"14

"Yes lets just go before it gets too late to."15

April turned on the ignition and pulled out of the drive way. The continued down the road for what seemed like forever until they were in Illinois.16

"Well I am going to pull over and rest,I think you should do the same Katelyn."17

"Yeah I am awfully tired"18

They slept for about 5-6 hours when April awoke out of a nightmare. Katelyn was still sleeping and she didn't want to bug her so she just pulled out of the rest area and continued her journey to Missouri.

HAHA hope you like,will have next chapter shortly...don't you hate stories that end like this?

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  • Much-Dipstick
    August 28

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    omg... keep it up, it's still great!!!!!! I reread chapter four and I liked the edits, they were great!!!! Keep going. I love the suspense. I hope they never catch up with them!!!!!!!! Eeeeppp, that would be so freaky and nasty and horrible. Keep going, this is fantastic!!!!!! ! Really good fear element, keeping the reader sitting on the edge of their seat. Message me as soon as you get the next bit up !