♥ All That Matters ♥1
He turns to see her watching him. Smiling he wonders when she decided that no, she didn’t hate him, she liked him instead. They’d fought so much that it honestly came as a small surprise.2
“Hey,” she says, grinning.3
“Hi,” is all he can think to say. When she launches into a story about her day, he realizes it doesn’t matter when she changed her mind – just that she did.4
“I love you,” he quietly interrupts her.5
She stops talking to smile at him. “I love you too, sweetie. Anyway, then Amy said something to Kelly who freaked out. She was like …”6
As he tunes her out, he smiles. She loves him. It’s all that matters.7
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Author notes
I don't know exactly. I was bored.
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how can i walk away when you're the reason i breathe?
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It could be better. I think it needs to be fleshed out. I has the idea for a good story but it seems like a short scene that could be more. Tell us a bit more about the characters. Sorry, I'm a sucker for character development.
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Aww this is cute! ANd you were right, it is VERY short lol!
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Thanks. I'm glad it made you smile. That's what I was hoping it'd do.
erica)♥(xoxo
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Even though this was short, it was okay. I would have liked to see a little more description. Pretty good though.
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Thanks. I wasn't trying to write with description. I didn't want it.
erica)♥(xoxo
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:] I <3 this! It doesn't matter that it's such a short story, it still holds some magic.
What I want to hear is what she looks like. Or maybe just her smell. As weird as that sounds... Though I adore this story and the length, I think that maybe one or two details on the girl couldn't hurt.
Keep writing magic like this! *pounds fist* :]
Loyal Stalker here! ♥
Cheers,
Sky♥Prince
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Thank you soo much. Um, I just wanted to keep the story short but I will stick in how she smells.
Aacck. I have another stalker? *ducks* Vitamin Water is my first one. Now I have two! Makes me feel special.
THANKS AGAIN. Your loyalty means sooo much to me. Honestly. XD
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*coughs* This is VW. :]
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WHAT?!?!?! WHEN DID YOU CHANGE YOUR NAME AND WHY DIDN'T SW TELL ME?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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:] Shouldn't you have gotten a message saying "Vitamin Water changed their name to _____"? :] Your observations skills amaze me.
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No, I didn't get one! And if I did ... I just ... I AM SOOO SORRY.
Forgive me?
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I loved when she went, "I love you too, sweetie. Anyway..." Hilarious!
This is so cute. Even though it was really short (and the characters' names were never mentioned
), I felt really connected to them--almost like I knew them. I love it when that happens! 
The last two lines made me go, "Aww...!" LOVED IT!!
Thank you for sharing! Your stories always cheer me up!
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Haha. All I could picture was this typical talkive girl.
I'm glad they cheer you up!
PS> THANK YOU.
erica)♥(xoxo
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For such a short piece, this was very good. I loved how you so perfectly crystalized such a beautiful moment. You write stories I want to be in. You have such a beautiful way of envisioning the world we live in. This was very cool.
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Thank you. "You write stories I want to be in." is like the highest of high compliments! So, seriously, thanks.
erica)♥xoox
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Awww! Cute. But Moon? I can't see a thing. I had highlight this to be able to see it.
Short, but sweet, and so adorable.
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Haha. Sorry about that. At the last minute I (by accident) changed the background and it took me forever to change it back again. (I forgot, if we're going to be honest.)
But thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I was bored.
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Ahhh. Much better. No biggie.
You're welcome.
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Oh. I posted the thing-a-ma-bob by the way. Like an hour ago. I just forgot to mention it. Because, well, let's face this too: I'm forgetful as forgetful can get.
xoxo!
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