An Ode to you, Friend (Poetry)

Friends forever for ever
An Ode to You, Friend
 
I hate words!
For spoken, are but air.
I prefer your faith in me, unbroken;
Than list to your words so fair!1

Life brings no joy like you- friend.
Faith, fulfillment and prophecy, blend
In the throb of a heart with it's own,
A heart so familiar, where we are known.2

There is more unto thee;
Especially our friendship hereafter to be,
When the flower of thy life shalt blossom and unfold
Out of hindering, darkness and cold.3

Love mocks thee, the raging desire
Doth not to the perfect aspire;
Nor lovest thou the soul thou wouldst win
To shut thine emptiness within.4

Friend! The word runs so deep!
Friend! The heart wakes from its sleep,
To behold this world, lit by a face.
Touched we have been, by Friendship's grace!5

For the pulchritude of each hour,
Of each day and each night.
For the bliss of the heart, mind and soul-
The mystic harmony, that links sound and sight!6

O heart, wherein so many hearts are known,
Your infinte throb stirs our own!
O friend of friends! What are we,
Who crave and yearn for more, despite having thee?
 
--Kartz

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  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 27

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    very descriptive and well expressed, something I enjoyed. Good job and good luck in my contest =DDD

    -Dani

    • Kartz
      September 27
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      Thank you... Glad it was to your liking...

      Peace.


  • Intrepid
    September 27

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    Something I appreciate in poetry is someone taking their time to express themsleves in a way that does not sound forced..but it inspirational... & someone who really cares about the truth in their writing.
    GOOD LUCK
    Temaria - Blair

    • Kartz
      September 27
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      Gee, thanks so much! Your kind words sure are inspiring... Thanks again. Peace, and have a nice day.


  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23

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    This was a beautfil, inspirational poem and I enjoyed every word and line of this poem. It has some great meaning behind it and I can tell it is honest and heartfelt.

    Blake ♣

    • Kartz
      September 25
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      Thank you for your kind words... I am happy to note that you enjoyed reading my humble attempt.

      Peace, and have a nice day.


  • Melancholic Smile
    September 22

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    Really good poem, flowed very well and great choice of wording. It really showed the importance and value given to friendship. Thanks so much for entering and good luck

    • Kartz
      September 25
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      Thank you very much... Your words inspire me to keep going.

      Peace, and have a nice day.


  • Kirin
    September 21

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    I've read this before
    I read it again
    I like it more
    You friend of mine!!

    All the best in the contest!!


  • LuckyK
    September 20
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    Beautifully written. I loved it Good Luck


  • Sgs gold member
    September 19

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    Awesome old style writing with this poem. I love how you emphasize the importance of "Friend" with capitalization. Thanks for entering!

    • Kartz
      September 19
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      I should say... Thanks for the opportunity!


  • LittleMissChrissie
    September 19

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    Great


    I loved your language that you used in this poem! It was brilliant and I really felt the warmth that came across. It felt real and it was sentimental without being corny. One of the better poems I've read in a while.

    The very best of luck in the contest!

    Chrissie

    • Kartz
      September 19
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      Thank you, Chrissie. Glad you liked it...


  • Kirin
    September 11
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    Beautiful Poem! Very emotional. Too high an English to be understood by my 128mb memory. You


  • Sgs gold member
    September 4
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    Sweet

    I love the way your phrase things, the choice of words you use. It reminds me of old-style writing, very nice indeed!

  • Strak
    September 4

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    Awesome!

    Simply superb... It's just amazing how you have played with words here. I must say, this is *bloody* good! Your friend must be lucky to have received such an ode. You have clearly epitomized the meaning of friendship... Kudos!

    • Kartz
      September 4
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      Big words... Thank you again. I'm touched.


  • Much-Dipstick
    September 4
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    Btw, I spotlighted this. I'm not sure if you get a note or not, but all the same. ^^!


  • Much-Dipstick
    September 4

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    Again, amazing... Really stunning. It flowed so beautifully and steadily. The words seemed... perfect. I love my friends dearly, and all of this was so true. I read it twice from pure enjoyment and intend to show it to one of my friends. Fantastic. Beautifully done. Thanks for such a lovely piece of work. Keep writing!

    • Kartz
      September 4

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      Thank you...

      You praise me too much! *Wonders what else to say...* I hope to live up to the same level in my other posts.

  • JabberWokk
    September 1

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    I liked how this rolled off the tounge. Yes, I read it out loud- I'm not sure if that's strange but...

    Great poem

    • Kartz
      September 4
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      Thank you...

      I won't say it's strange. I hope your reading it brought you a felling of well-being.

      Peace.


  • Terry Collett
    August 28
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    Fine poem.

    This is a fine poem; enjoyable, lucid.

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