The Oracle Speaks (Poetry)

Realms of fantasy
 
The Oracle Speaks
 
The hoary ones
Arise and run
In chaos' full eruption,
There exists an evil band
In every land
That delights in destruction!1

What seems shapeless,
Formless and faceless
Their great One is releasing!
So to enslave
Both God and knave
Their sorrows thus increasing.2

Who is man
To stay the hand
Of those even the Gods can't better?
And a hero yet
Takes the bet
To break the evil's fetter!3

Three lights of hope
To help you cope;
One south, in sand and wonder.
One to the east,
Defeat the beast
And tear their plan asunder!4

The final light
Will mark the fight
Where you must face your fear.
Leaving the door ajar,
You travel far
And yet, you find it near.
 
--Kartz

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  • Forgotten Anomaly
    October 7, 2008

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    Wonderful poem. Your choice of words was truely wonderful, the form, the flow, the way it sounds when spoken. I love this peice it is absolutely breath-taking. You are a finalist.

    • Kartz
      October 7, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind words. Very nice of you... Glad it is to your liking.


  • Oddems.
    September 30, 2008

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    The poem was spectacular - the flow and word choices were beautiful and left me wondering what the story was behind the poem. Great job!

    PR

    • Kartz
      October 1, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind words... Glad it was to your liking.

      Peace.


  • Six-Feet-Underwater
    September 28, 2008

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    This poem has a great flow and is wonderfully written. Very cool and an interesting concept, wonderful job.


  • Sgs
    September 26, 2008

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    This would totally make a very cool song, I love the flow and imagery of this piece. Great job, I would love to see more of your work!


  • Celestial Rose
    September 25, 2008

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    good job, you really caught my attention. I like it. Keep it up!!

    • Kartz
      September 25, 2008
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      Gratias... Glad it is to your liking.


  • Fritz O skennick
    September 5, 2008

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    Compelling read...

    Love this...
    Great narrative, rhythm & flow with a great rhyme scheme that captivated me throughout & left me wanting more...
    Well penned, well versed, well done!!!

    • Kartz
      September 5, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind words...


      • Fritz O skennick
        September 5, 2008
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        No probs, it was my pleasure...

        Have a great weekend,
        Take care,
        Fritz.....

  • jeremymiller
    September 5, 2008
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    Good work. I think you should combine your poems into a more epic poem. Just a thought.

    • Kartz
      September 5, 2008
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      Thanks...

      Will give it a try...

  • Strak
    September 4, 2008
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    The poetry was flowing like a river... Fantastic... Keep writing!


  • Much-Dipstick
    September 4, 2008

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    Wow... What more can I say... That was amazing. Short, but absolutely stunning. I barely know how to respond to that. ... I loved the flow. The lines read beautifully, and the rhythm was perfect. I don't pretend to have great poetry skills, but I thought this was absolutely amazing. Best of luck in the contests! Fantastic. I must go and find more of your work! Really good luck!


  • MysticalRayne
    August 29, 2008

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    Very interesting piece and well penned ~ best of luck in the contest


  • Kirin
    August 27, 2008

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    Beautiful poem! I had to read it twice to understand it though. Wonderful rhymes. Nice plot. Feels like there's gonna be a sequel portraying the aftermath of the prophecy. Great job. Congrats on your winning the award!!

    • Kartz
      August 27, 2008
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      Thanks... And yeah, thinking of a sequel. You are better with ideas, though. Why not give it a go?

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