Destiny: Prolouge

He missed his girl. His daughter that was taken away to safety from the Lord Nartucuss. But now that evil was gone, far away in other lands. His daughter could come home. King Roderic sat back in his chair. His desk full of paperwork that came after a large war. Supplies shipped here, livestalk taken there, but it needed to get done. His daughter, Oriel, did not help the matters. She had been on his mind since the war ended. He missed her and wanted her back. His son, Oriels brother, missed her too. King Roderic's nurse had taken Lucifer, but had no room nor enough food for Orile. Oriel was only a little girl when the war started, ten years ago. Now it was time for her to come home.1

"Sinic!" King Roderic yelled. A short, stout man appeared, rushing out from a corner in the castle room. "Send for my daughter, she is to come home."

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