I just stayed silent. Who were these people? "Damn it drake! Stay away from her!No killing the guest!" The one who looked Beautiful yelled. His voice was sweet and warm. "Ooh! who is she! The queen of Sheba! god just relax, you said she couldn't go back since she saw...well you know. So I thought maybe just kill her now and no one ever will know right?" The a*ss drake replied. "Chill Andy! She is only a lone *bunny* girl." Matt laughed, glaring at me. "Oh I'll show you who is an a*ss!" I hissed, tackling him again. Then he yelped in pain and the preppy one quickly got me off of Matt.1
I laughed because he was holding his balls. But drake shot a hungry glance at me. In just a blink of an eye he had my thought and he was kissing it. I tried to shove him away but he just twisted my wrist. "No!" Andy shouted, but he was to late. I saw Drake's fangs and I knew what he was. He sank his fangs deep into my thought then when he started to drink he cringed away. Then he started to scream in pain. Black and blue blood ran from his lips.2
I was just in shock but then I staggered forward. I felt my body turn cold and I looked down at my wrist. I saw black and blue filling my veins. It started to work it's way up and I screamed too.Pain was everywhere, it was like was locked in a cold room and I was chained to Dry ice. My hair started to grow longer and I felt my eyes leaving me.3
My eyes were gone, like it was cut out!4
My hair turned White, WHITE! Next thing I knew I was BLIND. I couldn't see, everything was gone but then I could see their body heart. What the hell was going on! Then I quickly blacked out. I mean like I was knocked out or something else was taking over me.5
~morning~6
I shot up awake, sweating but I wasn't in a bed but in some kind of cell. I was chained up to the wall and I had dried blood all over me. I screamed and Matt shot in the room quickly. When I saw bloody marks on him, my memory shot through me. I remember exactly what happened.7
I turned into some evil witch or something and I attacked Drake and then Matt tried to get me away from him so me and him...fought and he only won cause of Andy knocking me out. When I woke up I still was...evil. Then Matt tried to help me (for once) but I attacked him again. So they put a chain on my neck and chains everywhere else. But all of the chains were silver and they had spikes on them so if I tried to move I would be periced by them.8
I let out another scream in pain. Tears threatened to flow and I let them for once. "Calm down, the more you struggle, the more you get hurt." He whispered. "What is going on! Why am I here?" I screamed in fury and sorrow.9
He didn't answer. I decided to wait for him to trust me. "You'll be safe here." That was all he said. He left the room and I screamed in pain and fury. "Please trust me! Believe in me, Please let me go." I cried but no one came in to help. I sank to my knees and cried, that's all I could do. I fell asleep finally and I didn't want to wake up.10
4 weeks later...
When morning came, I saw red eyes watching me. When I saw it was drake I almost felt like the pain was worse. Blood was all over me, caked with it. I haven't spoken since that horrible day. Since that day I came to this place. "Hey Claire, how you feeling." He asked me but I didn't answer. What did it look like? I was bleeding to death and no one trusts me or believes in me anymore. Will no one ever did really.11
Matt came in, he hasn't came in here since that day too. He seemed the same still. Will of course it's only been 4 to 5 weeks right? I kept my head down so no one could see that I was crying. Then Jake (the preppy one) dragged a body in the room. When I saw it was my brother, anger shot through me. "Calm down." Matt whispered to me, "earn your trust back." "I'll let you down." I gritted through my teeth.12
Shock was all over drake's face. "You don't know that." Matt whispered again. Then he unlocked the chains and I was standing up now. "Do you know what you have done?" I growled, fangs sliding down in my mouth. This time I let my anger go, last time I resisted but now I was letting it go gradually. There was still pain but it felt good.13
My skin turned blue and black and my hair was black this time. Black eyes but still blind. Dark clothes and ready to kill. Next thing I know I was on top of Matt and he was lifeless...
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Comments
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Oh my...I had almost thought that you were improving your grammer.
1: wEll not wIll. Look them up and you wIll see the difference.
2: One minute she's a star thing, then she's a witch, now she's got fangs. MAKE UP YOUR MIND. It's ever so confusing when you change that quickly.
3: Why is it that she apparently remembers everything and then suddenly wants to know why she's locked up? Only a moron wouldn't understand that they were locked up for the good of others and themselves.
Please don't let these kind of errors go unchecked. You may want to try reading your work out loud, first to yourself and then to friends/family/whoever will listen. Whatever doesn't sound fluid probably needs to be fixed.
God bless,
~AE~

