Can't Deal

Only five minutes in
And they're at it
Over the computer1

I close my door, I don't want to hear this
I look for some salvation, there is none2

So I endure the yelling back and forth
In the hopes of a divorce3

Author notes

With my current mental state, this isn't helping.

--Aden

What can I do to make this work?

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  • Lostskins
    October 3

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    For just a short piece it really provides emotion and gives some readers something to relate to. It's powerful and real, great writing here.