Death has seized me with her hands, Suicide has drowned me in her love, Fate and Destiny have decided what becomes of me. Time has come for me and once you realize what had happened, it will be too late to turn back the clock. I won't say I am sorry because honestly, I don't think I have enough sorry left to say so. When the time comes, we'll meet again but until then look the other way and dry your tears. I will come back for you but not right now.
Author notes
I think I am a female but at times I can't help but wish I was a male. Maybe then would I get some acceptance.
A contest entry
- Famous Last Words by Taylor Renee.
100 points, ended October 3, 2008, 23 entries
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Killers Revive the Love in Dying.
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Ouch, both the piece and author's note hit home. Never enough sorry left to say it. o__o Awesome line there. XD
Great piece. Truly thought-felt. ^^
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This touches my heart deeply. As a female, I do not know what most men think, as, well, others. And until Judgement Day, you may not see your lover ever again.
It's amazing how strong and far this message in this short paragraph can take you.
I love it. -
"When the time comes, we'll meet again but until then look the other way and dry your tears. I will come back for you but not right now."- loved these lines...
Well wriiten... And if I may add- be proud of who you are, and what you are.
Peace, take care and God bless! -
This was great and hey it's cool being a female. I accept you.
No really be happy with what you are, it's not half bad, yeah we have our ups and downs, sometimes more than guys, but it all works out in the end.
Anyways, this was very well written. I liked it a lot. Good luck in the contest. God Bless! -
"...but until then look the other way and dry your tears."
I think that worked well in this, more than any other line. I'm not sure if you meant 'had' to be 'has' in 'what had happened', but I can't really comment on it since I don't know the entire context of it.
The sorry line, I'm starting to think, worked better than the one I mentioned above.
Either way, weird contest. Good luck in it.
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