A Softer World- DON'T READ IT. I'LL BE REALLY MAD IF YOU DO.

Banished. 1

The word echoed through her mind, forcing tears to well up in the corner of her jade eyes once more. She knew that her life would have to change drastically now- after living in the castle for 16 years, 2

Softly, she trailed her bloody fingers in the water. Tiny fish swamp in the murky depths, but fled at her approach. Her long, white dress billowed out behind her, clinging to her legs and impeding her movement.

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  • StarLia
    November 2
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    Hey just reminding you to give the person below you a word so they can get writing too. Thank you.


  • xjackieeex
    August 23

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    heyyy i am #18 i am going to give you a word your word is swamp i hope that you can find something good luck


  • StarLia
    August 23

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    Hi! Thanks for entering! You're our #19! You're going to be in charge #20's word. So give them their word soon so they can get a-writing. C:
    #18 is in charge of your word prompt, and I can go remind them to go give it to you now.
    Thanks again and best of luck.