My day with zac efron!!

So one day I was at the store and I ran into zac efron!!! He smiled at me and intoduced himself. ( as if I didn't know who he was already!) Then, he handed me an orange from the produce section and said, " Do you like oranges?" I grinned and nodded and said,"ya!!!!!!" I really didnt, but i would take anyting from that dremy guy!!!!!!! Then, he walked off and stumbled over a chimpanzee that was eating a banana. I helped zac up and he thaned me. Then, Ashely Tisdale came walking in the store too, holding a bag of popcorn, thowing it everywhere yelling," merry xmas!!!!!!!" Then, zac took my hand and led me to the frozen food section. He grabbed an ice cream carton and opened it. He smeared choco ice cream all over his face and said, " LOOK, I AM CHOCO MAN!!!!"" Then, he started doing the chicken dance. That was my goofy day with zac efron!!!

Author notes

My favorite book is of course High school musical(yes they made a book!!!) and my favorite charcter is troy bolton!!!

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  • Hellcat Metal
    September 5, 2008

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    "He smeared choco ice cream all over his face and said, " LOOK, I AM CHOCO MAN!!!!" What?? Omg that was funny. SO random. Even though I don't like Zac Efron, that was pretty funny and random. Thank-you for entering the contest!


  • Kagamine Rin
    August 30, 2008
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    Well, this was very random and cute, as well as someone a rant, but you lack detail and description.

    If you edit it, I may put you on my finalists list. =]

    Personality, I dislike Zac Efron. With "loathing passion". Neh.

    I wish you luck!

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    Misa Misa


  • SweeneyTodd-girl
    August 27, 2008
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    you got the randomness part down!


  • Midnight-Engaged
    August 24, 2008
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    ....I am left silent in the wake of you distressing story.


  • Applepip
    August 23, 2008

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    Enjoyable but very weird and some spelling mistakes. Dremy is spelt Dreamy. Also, the punctuation was poor. If you would of corrected everything and had a new line when people were speaking instead of bunching it all together it would of been great.

    Also, you might want to add some capital letters too. Personally, I'm not a big fan of Zac Efron but I guess you are. It's good to see you writing about something you like though, unlike me, I write about depressing things.

    Good job. With a little bit more length and some changes, it could be quite good. Thumbs up.

  • Elphinstone
    August 23, 2008

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    if you made it longer, and put in some actual normalness, then i think it would be less normal and more random. Does that even make sense? Anyways, I still enjoyed it. Well done


  • DeathNoteYaoi
    August 22, 2008
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    LOL!!! thax was good you should more in and it would be very funny welldone

    DNY--

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