Cold Sun 6

Darin didn't know what to do...one minite she was mad, the next she looked confused, and then she's crying. He took her into his arms cautiously and she clung to him...she clung to him as if her very existence in the world depended.1

"Death...it's beautiful; it's beautiful because no one has a clue when they'll go...or when someone else goes. We have all these doctors, and you know what?" she sheepishly looked into his eyes,"It doesn't really make a difference."2

He helped her sit up and watched as Ethal leaned onto the wall beside her bed, then sit "indian style". 3

"Have you ever seen Final Destination?"his nod encouraged her to go one,"What if death can be cheated? I saw it coming and I didn't even try to stop her..."4

She wasn't immortal...She really did have emotions. From all of the times that she fought with him, he would've never noticed.5

"Look...there's nothing that you or I could've done to stop her.But I have to go...I have to go to work."6

He slipped on his shoes and left the room...a couple of seconds Ethal heard the front door shut...7

"Am I in love with you?"her question came out as a whisper while slipping into a desolent sleep8

Author notes

ok this is the second and edited version of chapter six...I had the first draft put under my best friends screen name, which is "veng by death" b/c of computer complications.Hope you liked reading this !!!

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