[ "OMG marie more more more"1 ]

"OMG marie more more more"1

"what the *Fuge* lalo my name is brina who is marie???"2

Brina stared at her boyfriend of 3years with an evil stare Lalo (her boyfriend just called her the wronge name in bed).3

"oh babe i'm sorry but isn't your full name um um Sabrina marie Sanchez(soon to be." 4

"Yes Lalo it is but why you call me marie you never call me that you always call me brina or sabrina babe"5

"Marie sounds more spanish babe and when we get married to me i want to make sure your spanish just like me babe come on why would i ever cheat on you your hot babe and smart."6

Lalo was right my middle name is marie and it is spanish i guess but i'm not yeah i love him and want to be more in his family and in three months we will be married so i guess it makes sense.sabrina said thinking to her self...7

"Ok babe your right i guess i just got a little freaked you know i trust and love you right" Sabrina said trying to really make her self believe he would never cheat.8

"Good babe i love you and i think we just better go to sleep i have work tomorrow and i'm kind of out of the mood if you know what i mean" he said back to her making sure she never finds out the truth.9

"*beep beep beep" the clock goes off at 7 in the moring Lalo sneeks out of the bed trying not to disterb Sabrina as she sleeps sundly.10

Lalo leave's for "work" but really he goes to his friends house and stays there.11

Sabrina wakes up at about 12in the after noon and texts Lalo cell12

"hey babe thanks for letting me sleep call me latter or text ok i love you have a good day and work" send 13

Lalo gets it but never reaspons back but he did call her at about 7pm and Said" hey babe i'm stuck here in philly i'm just going to stay at my parents house tonight so this way i don't fight traffic in the moring ok i love you." and just hung up with out a word out of Sabrina's mouth.14

So she just desides to go to bed not thinking much about the phone call because in her mind he was probly still at work and should never been on the phone in the beging.15

Lalo is not at his parents house he is at a club messing around with one very pretty girl.16

Him and this girl leave the club and go to his brothers house to spend the night if you get it and this is how the story gets rough.17

Lalo slowly kisses this girl then he starts kissing her neck and she willingly takes off her shirt and he slides his had up and down her leg and under her skirt where just in luck for him she has no panties on and the rest is a done deal.18

Well his brother Dave calls Sabrina and it's now 2in the morning and does just like this.19

Dave"brina i need to tell you something"20

Sabrina"ok bro go what is it"21

Dave well actully i need you to here it from him not me cause you wont believe me"22

sabrina" hear what i'm confused what is going on"23

Dave still on the phone with Sabrina knocks on the door where his brother is 24

Lalo"yo bro what is up"shutting form in the room25

Dave holds phone close to the door and says"Bro sabrina called what you want me to tell her"26

Lalo"tell her i'm at work bro what you stupid come on you know i'm with this sexy girl"27

Click Sabrina hung up she was Pissed i mean who won't be she throw everything out of his and burned his clothes called him and left this on the voice mail"when you come home check the bathroom".28

Sabrina went so crazy that she drowned her self in the tub when Lalo got there it was to late but she did leave him a note and this is what it said.29

" Dear Lalo,30

I told you i would love you till the day i died and that i would go around the world and back for you and i would never went us to be apart but i guess you just didn't want the same thing so when i told you the day i stop trusting you is the day i die i guess you though i was joking uh well guess what i wasn't and now you can think everynight was that chick worth loseing me over 31

i guess she was so oh well love you lots 32

Your babygirl BrinaXOXOXOXOX"33

Lalo cried and throw things after reading this called his brother and told him everything and all his brother could say was why did you kill her like this man that girl loved you. 34

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Come on i wanna know what you thik tell the truth

would ever cheat on someone

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  • melodramatic emo
    September 3
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    it was abit jumbled to be honest I can tell you had amazing thought for this I really loved the ending it was sad brought a tear to my eye but I think the rest of the story lacked some depth the stroy could have gone real far I honestly read this coz I saw my name I was like ah what the hell might as well read it haha anyways nice job I can tell you really tried